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« on: October 17, 2014, 16:15:14 »
Name: Saiyahito
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Height: 1,73
Weight: 68
Hairstyle: Like Obito.
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Fire
Village: Hidden Forest
Clan: Ookami.
Good or evil at heart?: Good.

Description of the character's personality:
He loves his family, his friends. Saiyahito has a lot of friends. He likes to train every day. He likes to go fishing, eat a lot and spending the time with his friends. Rarely will see him angry and itching too kill someone.

Description of the character's history:
Saiyahito was born in Hidden Leaf Village. His father was Uchiha Shiro. For unknown reasons his mother died when Saiyahito was 2 years old. Wars came to the Hidden Leaf Village forceing Shiro and his son Saiyahito to flee from the land of fire. As years were passing he turned 10 and established his new home in the Hidden Forest, a land far far away from the wars of the Leaf. His father were accepted as a Jounin and 8 years later became an ANBU Capitan. Saiyahito is now 18 years old living a good life in Hidden Forest along with his Father and a lot of friends. He joined the academy student and become an Genin few months later. As he and his father were takeing a trip outside the village in a forest they where attacked by an unknown assasin. Shiro was an elite skilled ninja and defetead the assasin but, he got injured on his chest near his hearth. The enemy's weapon seemed to had a very powerfull poison. With no cure and a long distance to the near medical center, Uchiha Shiro died slowly in front of his son... Saiyahito carried his body back to his village and burried him. In that moment Saiyahito sworn to become more powerfull in order to protect his friends and the village. (I will add soon extra info or no , i have to think. SORRY for the language english is not my main language.)

Story Part 2. 6 january 2015
Death and Despair
One year has passed and Saiyahito completed a lot of missions for hes genin rank. Since hes father's death Saiyahito trained a lot in order to become more powerfull. One day he got a mission outside the village. The mission was simple, escorting a murder back to hes own village.  The squad was created by 3 chunins and 1 genin Saiyahito. As they were near the borders of the country and travelled alot, the capitan of the squad called the day and prepared for the night. All the people took a nap but not the Capitan, he stood awake all the night because he felt like someone is stalking them. Even though he prepared some traps, he couldnt sense the enemy's chakra. The night has gone and the morning has begun. As they were preparing to leave the Capitan ordered Saiyahito to collect the traps or the remanings of the traps if they were destroyed. Saiyahito gone far for like 15 minutes from the squad. He returned back with all the traps but when he got back, all the people were laying on the ground dead. The unkwnown assasin left right when Saiyahito arrived. Saiyahito saw him like for a half second. He saw on the assasin's mask a symbol similar with the assasin's headband that killed hes father. In that moment Saiyahito got on hes kneels and got stunned because he remebered the death of hes father. Few seconds later a small rain started and let Saiyahito into the rain for few minutes. Imediatly after, 4 jonins of the murder's country were patroling near by when they heared Saiyahito's scream. After a few moment of discussion, the murder's body was transported back to hes own village and Saiyahito got escored by 2 jonins back to The Hidden Forest. As they arrived home, Saiyahito met the Kage and exchanged any intel he got with does 2 jonins at the kage's office. Saiyahito rested for 5 days and start trainning for 3 months. He entered and passed the Chunin exam 5 months later . Saiyahito is now 20 years old hes a Capitan of a squad and a powerfull shinobi. TO BE CONTINUED! 
(SORRY for the language english is not my main language.)

Story Part 3. 2 february 2018
A new Captain
Music plays:
Few years have passed, it's September, the yellow and brown leafs of the hidden forest village were dancing in the air. A lovely day just to relax in a park or with your friends. Well that's what was Saiyahito thinking. “Well my birthday is coming, so I will need to take some days off, I mean, man I feel like a workaholic. Although I wish I could fought some enemies.”, said Saiyahito in his mind and yawning.
As they were patrolling:
Hey captain, can we rest a bit? Looks like the other 3 guys are becoming tired!”, said Keira-chan.
Well you’re the leader, what do you propose?”, asked Saiyahito.
We will rest once we get out of this valley and we reach the forest on the north side of the country. It shouldn’t take more than an hour its not that far and we will set camp there.”, said Keira-chan.
Very well, that’s what we will do then. Ok guys you heard her, one more hour and we will rest, so hang in there.”, said Saiyahito.
Hai, Hai.”, said Tao.
Yes sir, I mean mam, I mean captain sir…”, said Sariu a bit confused.
HA.”, quickly responded Hazic.
Music starts playing:
Saiyahito was patrolling with one of his friends Keira-chan and 3 other chunnins Tao, Sariu and Hazic near the hills of the hidden forest village, then to patrol the forest on the north side of the country, it was a simple mission a C rank one. Saiyahito enjoys a good fight but he felt bored, scouting and no fighting it’s not quite his style. All the work he put into becoming a powerful shinobi got him a lot of A and S rank missions. But in the last year, because of the pace, the A and S rank missions were very few almost none, even B ranks were rare. So, he was stuck with his friend Keira-chan doing some C or D rank missions and observing her actions on different missions. She was preparing to become a captain, so her actions will show if she’s the right one.
Keira-chan was a young female about 20 years old with straight, purple hair reaching down to her waist, warm brown eyes, and a shade of red lipstick. She wears the standard green uniform and black pants. Her height was 165 cm and had 60 kgs. She was a pure hearth, tough she didn’t have any family her were about were unknown to Saiyahito. Like his best friend her favorite weapon is a katana. She was skilled in kenjutsu. Although sword fighting was her specialty, she was also a good wind user. Keira has a crush on Saiyahito and he doesn’t know. She sees him powerful, caring, lovely and a good teacher. They’ve done a lot of missions together. She also didn’t know a lot of her crush also Saiyahito was very curious about her but didn’t asked much in respect of her choice. She didn’t reveal much about her family, only the kage and few higher-ups now more about her.
After 30 minutes of running and jumping they arrive at a crossing road.
Music starts:
Umm, captain I mean Saiyahito, do you see that, who are does 2 guys there? It wasn’t mentioned in the briefing that we will met with other shinobi, never the less that there might be from other villages as we are in peace.”, asked Keira.
Hmm…we are near the border so yea other shinobis from other villages might appear. Well you are the leader, what do you think it will happen once we met them? It’s your call! From now one I will stop observing and I will follow your orders.”, said Saiyahito.
This mission might actually be interesting and turns into a B or A rank one, though it’s too much for her she needs this, hehe let’s see her diplomacy.”, said Saiyahito in his mind while smirking a bit.
Okay, let’s hide here for a moment, preserve chakra and see what intel we’ve got.”, said Keira.
Music starts:
Well from the looks of it, they are from the Village Hidden by Forest judging by their bandanas.”, said chunin Tao.
Chunin Hazic, verify the areas and search for other ninjas, don’t engage them, if they are camping or patrolling head back as fast as you can and report what you got, if there isn’t anyone on a 2 km radius area, also head back to us. If we need backup we will signal.”, said Keira.
Alright mam.”, said Hazic and disappeared.
They are our allies, tough we need to be cautious, one of them is very hurt. It might also be a trap from them or others who want a war between our nations.”, said Saiyahito.
Tao, use your sensory type jutsu and see if anyone is hiding near them.”, said Keira.
Very good Keira, you indeed look like a good captain.”, said Saiyahito in his mind.
Tao starts focusing for a few seconds.
Captain, there is one ninja approaching them.”, said Tao.
Music starts:
Is it enemy? Reinforcements?”, asked Keira.
I don’t know captain. But I sense a huge chakra.”, said Tao
I think we should wait a bit to see what happens.”, said Saiyahito.
 “Agree.”, said Keira
He gave something to one of them. Looks like a scroll.”, said Tao.
Holy crap that might be valuable intel. Looks like this mission might turn into a S rank one, the guy that left might be an ANBU.”, said Saiyahito in his mind with excitement.
Should we call Hazic back? The guy that just left might be at least a jounin level or even worse an ANBU. Who knows what the other two are.”, said Sariu with a panicked voice.
Sariu, calm down, you forgot that we have Saiyahito the next ANBU candidate that didn’t want to become a jounin but chooses to be one of the elite!”, said Keira with a bit of blush on her cheeks.
Still having to fight the two of them and protect my squad it will be hard but enjoyable. From what I understand peace is just a form of preparing to war.”, said Saiyahito in his mind.
Sariu, you will come with me and Saiyahito. Tao, you will stay here and join us if anything happens to the other guy that just left. We will signal you to come to us if everything is ok.”, said Keira with a commanding voice.
Ha, captain.”, quickly responded Tao.
Yes, mam.”, said Sariu.
Ok, lets go and meet our "friends".”, said Keira.

TBA 😉

See ya later for the next part
« Last Edit: February 02, 2018, 16:57:28 by Saiyahito »


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Re: Saiyahito
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2014, 16:25:45 »
Great story, but you know that theres no Uchiha right?
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« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2014, 16:36:11 »
I know thats why i made a new char, Uchiha Shiro was a bad choice so i was thinking to make another char also giveing Uchiha Shiro an ending XD.
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« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2014, 17:02:37 »
I know thats why i made a new char, Uchiha Shiro was a bad choice so i was thinking to make another char also giveing Uchiha Shiro an ending XD.
Sweet like the char tho!
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« Reply #4 on: October 17, 2014, 19:54:44 »
quite a nice char i must say myself
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« Reply #5 on: October 17, 2014, 20:05:35 »
Nicely made character, and well done.
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« Reply #6 on: October 17, 2014, 21:04:18 »
Somebody that actually wants to join Ookami.

I'm surprised.
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« Reply #7 on: October 18, 2014, 01:52:01 »
Name:Naruto Uzimaki
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Blood type:narutos
Primary chakra nature:narutos (i don't understand this question can you clarify for the future) (what is chakra nature?)
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« Reply #8 on: October 18, 2014, 08:29:08 »
In the game there is not Hidden Leaf Village and characters from the show either.You have to make your own character with his/her own personality and skills.Chakra natures: fire,water,earth,wind or lightning (Naruto has wind nature btw). You should watch the Shippuuden series too!
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« Reply #9 on: October 18, 2014, 14:23:37 »
When i made my story i was thinking that the leaf is in a nother corner of this world that cant be reached that's why i use it. And also the 5 countrys from naruto world in my story were destroyed be them self. So yea u can say that the leaf and other villages were a part of this world.
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« Reply #10 on: October 18, 2014, 18:55:48 »
No, u made a brilliant story! i replied to Naruto Uzumaki's post :D
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« Reply #11 on: October 18, 2014, 19:17:19 »
Name:Naruto Uzimaki
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Blood type:narutos
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« Reply #12 on: October 19, 2014, 11:13:54 »
Somebody that actually wants to join Ookami.

I'm surprised.
Well, I had a request even before him, Dre, he PM-ed me some time ago. And also it's the only clan so far of the Hidden Forrest.

ON: Is a really good character :D I can't wait to meet you in the game.
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« Reply #13 on: January 04, 2015, 11:44:06 »
More story info comming soon in next week :))
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« Reply #14 on: January 06, 2015, 11:48:44 »
THREAD UPDATE!
Story Part 2. 6 january 2015
Death and Despair
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