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Keito Zakushi
« on: August 25, 2014, 00:57:59 »
Name: Keito Zakushi
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 177 cm
Weight: 62 kg
Hairstyle: Spiky, high
Facial hair: -
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Lightning
Village: Hidden Hill
Clan: Zakushi
Good or evil at heart?: Evil



Description of the character's personality:

Keito is very silently. He don't talks very much to other people and just if it's necessary. But to his friends he is very nice and you can't complain about him. Keito also is inscrutable so it's hard to find out his character. That also helps him in fights.

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Keito was born in Hidden Hill and grew up like a normal child. He had nice parents and had no sibling. He was an average student at the academy. In his time at the academy he just had 2 friends (his cousin Kuroko, and hist best friend Haku) because of his lonely character traits. But he didn't even want to have more friends. He often trained with Haku to get a Genin. Although he wasn't that ambitious like Haku, Keito reached the Genin Rank. He still had a normal life as a Genin and completed a lot of missions with Kuroko and Haku sucessful. But when he was 12 years old his cousin Kuroko left the Village after some of his friends died. That was a shock for Keito, who doesn't had many friends anyway. But he knew he can't bring his cousin back to the village, so he accepted it fast. Only 1 year later his parents was sent to a special mission and got caught by ANBU. Keito, who actually was very quiet, started to cry. As Haku saw how sad Keito is, he promised him to take revenge. Keito actually didn't want to have revenge, he just wanted to have his parents back, so he tried to stop Haku. But Haku was determinded started his personaly mission. But with his Genin Rank he had no chance to win the fight against the Anbu, so he got killed. Still being very sad about the kidnapping of his parents and lying down on the ground, he got told of the death of Haku. As he realized that his mind was full of rage. He didn't cope with such an incomprehensible situation and got angrier and angrier. Now he just had revenge thoughts and since that day he took his power out of the anger. In his rage he left Hidden Hill and just wanted to get stronger to take revenge and to save his parents. By chance he met his cousin and its Sensei Hao on a Trainingstrip. He told Kuroko what happened. Kuroko suggested Keito to go with them. He accepted and trained with Sensei Hao and Kuroko. He trained harder then ever before because he had an aim: to get stronger to be able to bring his parents back! This opinion made him stronger stronger and he was no longer just an average shinobi. After finishing the Trainingstrip with his Sensei and his cousin he immediately joined the organization Katakiuchi. Now 2 years later he is a proud member of Katakiuchi and stills trains hard to get stronger. He often searched for his parents, but noone knows, how they are now. But Keito doesn't give up hope to save his parents one day, because that's what makes him strong...
« Last Edit: August 25, 2014, 01:39:04 by Nirasu »



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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2014, 05:50:36 »
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He accepted and trained with Sensei Hao and Kuroko.
I really hope you spoke with marius about it, because I'm pretty sure It's up to him, since Hao is his character.
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2014, 06:36:24 »
Will he ever gain a second chakra nature?
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2014, 10:13:50 »
@misi  I asked him, if it's ok that he is my sensei,too, and he said it's ok so... I don't know if he has already read the post, but if there is something he don't like, I'm sure he will tell me, but is it ok for you to be my cousin ? ;D

@timioyekanmi  I actually don't know ^^ at the moment he is content with his lightning style so he don't need... but at the end of the story I mentioned that he stills trains hard so there are good chances that he will gain a second one. Anyway if he will gain a second nature it will be Wind. I know Lightning and Wind isn't the best combo but he would learn to handle it ;)

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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2014, 11:07:06 »
It's ok if you want to be my cousin
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #5 on: August 26, 2014, 16:54:53 »
Nice but dude, your just another rogue ninja, there are too many imo, ofc. No ofense
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #6 on: August 26, 2014, 20:20:27 »
Ty ^^ but if there are too much rogue ninja in your opinion, then try to preserve the power balance between village- and rogue-nins ;)

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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #7 on: August 26, 2014, 20:41:03 »
The rogue ninjas are still more unique than the ninjas that stay in villages. The useless rogue ninjas are going to die out quickly. Rogue ninjas need to make a name for themselves. Regular ninjas do not.
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #8 on: August 27, 2014, 14:59:13 »
The rogue ninjas are still more unique than the ninjas that stay in villages. The useless rogue ninjas are going to die out quickly. Rogue ninjas need to make a name for themselves. Regular ninjas do not.
That's not true, think about Kakashi's father Konoha's White Fang, or Minato, Yellow Flash or even Naruto known as Hero of the Hiden Leaf. :) so your argument is invalid.
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #9 on: August 27, 2014, 15:07:17 »
The rogue ninjas are still more unique than the ninjas that stay in villages. The useless rogue ninjas are going to die out quickly. Rogue ninjas need to make a name for themselves. Regular ninjas do not.
That's not true, think about Kakashi's father Konoha's White Fang, or Minato, Yellow Flash or even Naruto known as Hero of the Hiden Leaf. :) so your argument is invalid.
Kakashi is more of a hero than his father.But his argument isn't invalid, he said Rogues are more unique, he didn't claim that village shinobi are all alike, of course they have their heroes as well. But counting, missing nins have more legendary nins.

You shouldn't be bashing those who want to be missing nins, you should rather try to convince the others to stick with a village if you think there are too many rogues.
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #10 on: August 27, 2014, 17:23:58 »
The rogue ninjas are still more unique than the ninjas that stay in villages. The useless rogue ninjas are going to die out quickly. Rogue ninjas need to make a name for themselves. Regular ninjas do not.
That's not true, think about Kakashi's father Konoha's White Fang, or Minato, Yellow Flash or even Naruto known as Hero of the Hiden Leaf. :) so your argument is invalid.
Kakashi is more of a hero than his father.But his argument isn't invalid, he said Rogues are more unique, he didn't claim that village shinobi are all alike, of course they have their heroes as well. But counting, missing nins have more legendary nins.

You shouldn't be bashing those who want to be missing nins, you should rather try to convince the others to stick with a village if you think there are too many rogues.
I was just saying that he isn't right, anyway, I think is enough with off topic, after all here is just a character presentation.
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #11 on: August 27, 2014, 17:47:43 »
The rogue ninjas are still more unique than the ninjas that stay in villages. The useless rogue ninjas are going to die out quickly. Rogue ninjas need to make a name for themselves. Regular ninjas do not.
That's not true, think about Kakashi's father Konoha's White Fang, or Minato, Yellow Flash or even Naruto known as Hero of the Hiden Leaf. :) so your argument is invalid.
Kakashi is more of a hero than his father.But his argument isn't invalid, he said Rogues are more unique, he didn't claim that village shinobi are all alike, of course they have their heroes as well. But counting, missing nins have more legendary nins.

You shouldn't be bashing those who want to be missing nins, you should rather try to convince the others to stick with a village if you think there are too many rogues.
I was just saying that he isn't right, anyway, I think is enough with off topic, after all here is just a character presentation.
You are not a judge to decide who is wrong here. It is enough that people have to put up with your unconstructive spamming in this board, do not start arguments. I was trying to emphasize the fact that he can do whatever he wants, whether you agree with his decision or not.

These have been my 2 cents. If you do not like do not post, as simple as that. And this being said, we are DONE.


Apologies to Nirasu for this, but some people have to understand a few things.
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Re: Keito Zakushi
« Reply #12 on: August 27, 2014, 22:48:55 »
You don't need to apologize. It's normal that there arise discussions ;)
But I have to say m4ar1us is right :P

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You may yet consider joining Kazangakure. The Akaihono clan would be willing to adopt you
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