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An OC i developed a while ago
« on: August 04, 2014, 23:06:52 »

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Full Name: Luciano Aburame
Nickname: Luci

Age: 14
Birthdate: 03/21
Gender: Male

Height: 5’4 in
Weight: 92 lbs

Nindo: "Fight me and you shall Never recover. Forfeit and withdraw "
Personality: Luciano is a calm, quiet and laid back, very laid back as well as being a collect, solitary and a quite mysterious person rarely ever smiling or showing emotion making him observant and silent, leading to a somewhat 'antisocial' attitude.  At times Luciano can get aggravated easily but usually he can control his anger. Other than loving peaceful places, Luciano also has a love for training, making sure he is in top shape for any fight to come, so that way higher ranking shinobi doesn't look down on him. Usually is seen with his in hands in his pockets. Luciano also likes to study various insects while he is in a peaceful environment when no one is around looking for ways to counter weaknesses.

Village: Konohagakure 
Rank: Genin
First Class:  Ninjutsu Class
Second Class: Sensor Subclass

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Bloodline: Aburame Clan
• Genin : 1,500 insects
• They do not need to form hand signs to perform the lower level techniques or supplementary ones due to connecting to their insects easier. (C rank maximum)
• The Aburame have an affinity for bugs and various insects, thus knowing and gaining a rare knowledge of antidotes and poisons.
• Due to the two different chakra sources, Genjutsu that is recognized as such can be Kai-ed out of with the insect's assistance. (assistance Kai, not self-Kai) Drains 500 insects for use.
• Aburame techniques that mention chakra draining/absorption restore 1/2 of the insects used for the technique upon success.


Chakra Pool:   225 +  225 = 450
Stamina Pool: 025 +  025 = 050
Chakra Element: Fuuton
Chakra Color: Silverish White with Black speckles
Chakra Materialization: Takes the form of a Beetle

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Tracking
• Control Over kikaichu
• A Fast Thinker
• Stealth
Weaknesses:
• Crystal Release ( for now)
Fears:
• Feeling Weak
• Death
• Being Emotional
Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.

• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Blood Line type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is. 

Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster. - Ninjutsu Class
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. - Sensory Class
•  Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster.- Sensory Class
Personal Attributes:
The Clans True Successor - Learn Clan techniques one (2) post faster. 
•  The Clan Prodigy - 2 Extra Custom Jutsu
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Ryo: 両 $0000000
AC:        0001400
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 4
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 1
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 08 / 12
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 05
• [strike]Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00[/strike]
• [strike]Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00[/strike]
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Weapon Type:   N/A
Weapon Range:  N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location:
• N/A

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• Shuriken x5
• Shuriken x 5
  • [/url] Breath Mask
    • [url=http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=6&t=20628185#358719361]
  • [/url] Medium Sized Gourd for kikaichu Insects

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    ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
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    Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
    • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
    • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
    • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
    • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
    • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
    • Kai [ Release ]
    ••
    • Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [ Shadow Clone Technique Rank: B

    • Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu [ Crow Clone Technique ] Rank: C

    • Sanzengarasu no Jutsu [ Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique ] Rank: C




    Fuuton
    • Tobidougu Soujuu no Jutsu [ Projectile Control Technique ] Rank: E

    • Kaze Bakuhatsu [ Wind Explosion ] Rank: D

    • Kaze no Yoroi [ Armor of Wind ] Rank: D

    • Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu [ Wind Torpedo Technique ] Rank : C

    • Tatsumaki Wana [ Tornado Trap ] Rank : C




    ▬▬┤|Aburame Clan Jutsu
    • Kikaichū no Jutsu [ Destruction Bug Host Technique ] Rank: B

    • Human Cocoon Technique Rank: E [ 50 Insects ]

    • Mushi Sekkou no Jutsu [ Insect Spying Technique ] Rank: E [ 1 Insect ]

    • Hijutsu: Mushiyose [ Secret Technique: Insect Gathering ] Rank: D [ 10 Insects ]

    • Mushi Bunshin no Jutsu [ Insect Clone Technique ] Rank: D [ 100 Insects ]

    • Mushi Kabe no Jutsu [ Insect Wall Technique ] Rank: C [ 200 Insects ]

    • Hijutsu: Mushimayu [ Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon ] Rank: C

    • Mushi Jamingu no Jutsu [ Insect Jamming Technique ] Rank: D [ 500 Insects ]






    ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u









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    ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤Birth├▬
    At the birth of Luciano, it was under clan customs to make him the host body for a single kikaichū insect once outside the womb. The kikaichū would would barrow itself though his inside making tunnel as well as multiplying itself increasing in numbers. Luciano being just the newborn to two Shinobi’s Luc and Kyriano Aburame made him a somewhat known ninja amongst higher ranking ninja’s causing him to live in their shadows in the future unless he becomes a better ninja and sensor then them both.

    ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤1 - 13 years old├▬
    At the age of one, Luciano’s parents was worried that their son hasn’t shown any hint of knowing how to control his abilities making him dangerous at times. Good thing he didn't have the venomous insects of that would be a big problem for the village itself. This would go on until Luciano was at the age of 4. When Luciano was at the age of 5 Luci and Kyriano was worried because their once troublesome son hasn’t shown anymore signs of even having his kikaichū insect anymore which made them fear for Luciano’s life.

    Since they felt he couldn’t use his Clan jutsu anymore they enrolled him in that ninja academy at the age of 10 hoping that it would help him find his bloodline jutsu again. Little did they know was that Luciano just decided not to tell them to do anything. For 3 years Luciano stayed in the academy learning everything he can becoming one of the smart genins to graduate in his class. Having knowledge about almost any jutsu and bloodline he has come in contact with giving him a great advantage against the other ninja’s

    ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤14 - ? years old├▬
    Now a Genin Luciano has a lot to live up to, being a Leaf Village Sensor Aburame he also has a great responsibility when it come to help people out. Now trying to find his purpose, Luciano plans on being one of the Top Sensor ninjas as well as the top ninja from the Aburame Clan, and plans to be a Leaf Village Anbu or Oinin.

    After Graduating, Luciano began to train at the Academy Learning various jutsu's and clan techniques. While he was training he heard an annoucement of the former Hokage's resigning and that very one should go vote. Going to the Hokages Office to vote Luciano felt as though it was taking to long so he went back to train Leaving a shadow clone in his place, who voted for Masaru Uchiha, who became the next Hokage........

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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2014, 04:00:24 »
The level of detail here is astounding.
Well done, sir.

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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2014, 04:01:58 »
The level of detail here is astounding.
Well done, sir.
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho

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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2014, 04:06:22 »
Dang boy you really outdid yourself here
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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #4 on: August 05, 2014, 04:09:49 »
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho
What rp was that, if I may ask?

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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #5 on: August 05, 2014, 06:09:04 »
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho
What rp was that, if I may ask?
its a rp on gaiaonline called shinobi Nations

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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #6 on: August 05, 2014, 06:41:26 »
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho
What rp was that, if I may ask?
its a rp on gaiaonline called shinobi Nations

Ah, I get'cha.
Perhaps I'll take a look at it, flesh out my own character a bit.
(If I can track it down, of course.)
Thank you.

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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #7 on: August 05, 2014, 08:12:24 »
Nice character. Only one thing that I'd like to point out:

Going to the Hokages Office to vote Luciano felt as though it was taking to long so he went back to train Leaving a shadow clone in his place, who voted for Masaru Uchiha, who became the next Hokage........
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I don't think that genin actually get to vote for the Hokage. But anyways, that's a small, insignificant detail, nice character overall.
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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #8 on: August 05, 2014, 08:16:26 »
It's a really nice character, but unfortunately, clans from Naruto won't be implemented. Well, I think you can create Aburame clan, but you'll not get insects.
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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #9 on: August 05, 2014, 21:26:14 »
Nice character. Only one thing that I'd like to point out:

Going to the Hokages Office to vote Luciano felt as though it was taking to long so he went back to train Leaving a shadow clone in his place, who voted for Masaru Uchiha, who became the next Hokage........
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I don't think that genin actually get to vote for the Hokage. But anyways, that's a small, insignificant detail, nice character overall.

hue i forgot to take tht part out, but during the rp, there wasnt a hokage as well as not alot of members of the leaf so everyone had to vote. i couldnt find the update version of my OC which was a chuunin/ root member so i grabbed this one. I might make a layout of the character i want to make in Narusumi

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Re: An OC i developed a while ago
« Reply #10 on: November 10, 2024, 13:42:52 »
It's impressively detailed, but I say it needs a rewrite... As a Kazangakure ninja!
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