Jutsu Creation Topic

[granit]

Jutsu name : Tsukyomi
Jutsu type : Genjutsu
Jutsu description : The user implies severe illusionary pain to the enemy for a certain amoubt of time varyi ng on your mastery pf the skill.
Jutsu level : Intermediate
Chakra nature : Yin release
Jutsu range: 4-5 walking steps
Effects if hit : The enemy sees the user slashing him with a sword while he is bound (with ropes or chain or that stuff) to  a T-like beton scructure. The enemy doesn't die but is paralyzed and cannot see what is happening.

[Aoi]

^ Something more original

[granit]

I wasn't trying to be original.

But if you want original shit then:

Jutsu name : Hopeless fighting
Jutsu type : Genjutsu
Jutsu description : The enemy is caught in a illusion in which he fights a illusionary you who cannot be defeated.The enemy cannot move unless he releases himself or someone else does that.
Jutsu level : Intermediate
Chakra nature : Yin release
Jutsu range : Very short
Effects if hit: The enemy fights an illusionary you which he cannot defeat , but he thinks you're damaging him when you attack him , thus making it harder to notice it is a genjutsu. The enemy is immobilized until he escapes.

Jutsu name : Coop Fire Destruction
Jutsu type : Ninjutsu
Jutsu description : The user exhales a great stream of fire from their mouth. Users cooperate to make this jutsu more powerful, the more the better.
Jutsu level : Novice
Chakra nature : Fire release
Jutsu range : Large, increases with the number of users.
Effects if hit : Damage , burning and loss of sight.

Jutsu name : Lightning Wolf
Jutsu type : Ninjutsu
Jutsu description : The user creates an AI controlled wolf made out of electricity that rushes straight to the enemy that is closest to you.
Jutsu level : Intermediate
Chakra nature : Lightning release
Jutsu range : Medium
Effects if hit : Damage , short paralyzing.

[Mars]

I'm not being sarcastic, your first one was pretty original.
I like it!

[granit]

Jutsu name : (I cannot think of anything)
Jutsu type : Ninjutsu (maybe you will say nitaijutsu but it is not as it is the chakra that attacks and defends)
Jutsu description : A chakra shield appears around you from which you can emerge a hand that attacks pr grabs somebdy.You can control the hand with the mouse by holding a certain key. The look and and the usage are very very similar to Susano.
Jutsu level : Intermediate
Chakra nature : Depends on the chakra nature of the user
Jutsu range: The hand has a base range of 6 meters
Effects if hit : Depends on the chakra nature of the user.

[Konohuro]

Jutsu name : (I cannot think of anything)
Jutsu type : Ninjutsu (maybe you will say nitaijutsu but it is not as it is the chakra that attacks and defends)
Jutsu description : A chakra shield appears around you from which you can emerge a hand that attacks pr grabs somebdy.You can control the hand with the mouse by holding a certain key. The look and and the usage are very very similar to Susano.
Jutsu level : Intermediate
Chakra nature : Depends on the chakra nature of the user
Jutsu range: The hand has a base range of 6 meters
Effects if hit : Depends on the chakra nature of the user.

This sounds like an involuted version of susanoo.
I would suggest a modification: Summon a golem withoutlegs that surrounds you and can attack. While this is activated you can't move, you can only melee attack using golem's hands. The golem will be made of your first element type of chakra, and depending on this, the golem will have different stats. For e.g.:
Wind- When you approach wind golem you are pushed back thus he is immune to melee attacks. Isn't immune to jutsus, the jutsus deal less damage than they should.
Fire- Can be attacked using melee but it receives less damage. While the attacker is near the golem, he get's continuosly damage from the fire. Isn't immune to jutsus, the jutsus deal less damage than they should.
Earth- It has a very powerfull armor, the melee and jutsus deal no damage but it cause the golem to erode causing the destruction of the golem after a certain amount of attacks.
Lightning- When he is attacked melee, the exactly amount dealt by the attack is recieved by the attacker. Isn't immune to jutsus, the jutsus deal less damage than they should.

[granit]

It should look like the first version of susanoo (no eyes , only one hand when the user wants , just some bones protecting you).

I think you should be able to move and use ninjutsu and genjutsu (and shurikenjutsu) , or at least use ninjutsu and genjutsu (and shurikenjutsu too).

Also Wind and Lightning are unfair to Taijutsers.
And Fire is enough if it just burn the attackers.

Also you used it as an example (i think) , you wrote a pretty good system.

[Shivraj]

I think Konohuro's example sounds more awesome and detailed and epic!

[granit]

Yup , it does not only sound but it IS more detailed.
Maybe he used it just as an example but lightning  , fire and wind are unfair against taijutsu users.

[StrawHatSeyi]

You have to understand, a jutsu like this is kinda OP, the people who have obtained this jutsu must be very skilled. Plus it probably won't be impossible to beat by Taijutsu users. Just very hard, because it's an OP jutsu

[Konohuro]

I think such a jutsu should be like an end-game jutsu. The last jutsu in the chain of elemental jutsus, that can eventually have a death chance when learnt. Honestly, I didn't thought at those who are using only taijutsu but there can be a chance for them too:
(S-taijutsu user, G-golem jutsu user)
While someone is using the golem jutsu, S can wait at a certain distance (where he can't be attacked) until G does another move. As G can't move to reach for S he will have to dismiss the jutsu or wait until all his chakra is consumed by the golem. Either way, the golem will disapear and S will be free to engage.

[granit]

Yeah , the fact that taijutsu users (Aka S) can't attack the jutsu user (Aka G) while he has it , can be balanced by a very high chakra consumption.

EDIT : I originally intented this to be a shield not hindering you. in gen and ninjutsu nor in moving. It would prove itself very useful for gen and ninjutsu specialists who suck at taijutsu.
Buut since you guys  like some overpowered static golem then..... maybe it can be two different jutsus o_O.

[LordKawaii]

Jutsu Name: Fire Dragon's Mobility
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Jutsu Description: The user spits fire behind or beneath them giving them a boost forward or upwards respectively, this would allow for greater mobility in combat, such as dodges.
Jutsu Level: Novice
Chakra Nature: Fire
Jutsu Range: Low
Effects if hit: Any one caught in the blast of someone using the boost would take different levels of damage depending on how close they were to the origin point of the blast.

[granit]

Cool suggestion. 
Just does the fire come out of your mouth or what?
I would suggest coming out from your hands. (or your feet)

P.S Your first pic is soo true lol (I hope SLO doesn't become like that)

[LordKawaii]

Honestly, I would leave where it comes from to the devs if they consider it, I hadn't really thought this would get any attention.

(I mean it could come out your butt for all I care, If the devs wanted.)

As for the pictures, I certainly don't think SLO will be like this, It's purely a joke, just in case anyone thought otherwise :b