Takumi Himitsu

[takami]

Name: Takumi Himitsu
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 1.71cm
Weight:58Kg
Hairstyle: Short
Facial hair: N/A
Hair color: Red
Eye color: Red/Black
Blood type: Unknown
Primary chakra nature: Lightning
Hidden Village: Hidden Thunder
Clan:Himitsu
Good or evil at heart?: good....maybe? I guess it depends. Well, do not annoy him...just in case.

Description of the character's personality: A very calm person, easily bored and usually detached from other people, but when enraged its impossible to calm him down, the only way is to wait for his rampage to get to an end or to die trying to stop him. He follows orders without hesitation, whatever it is...probably he doesn't care, he just want to get paid and kill time (or people?). Always trying to measure his strength to get better, and he would do anything to aquire more power .... if it is to be able to protect those friends he still managed to get or just greed of power, even he doesn't knows ...still, there are very few things precious to him, and he would cold-bloodedly kill anyone who dares to harm them.

Description of the character's history: -deleted-

Combat style: As an expert in genjutsu usually he ends his opponent combining genjutsu and lightning style/kenjutsu, but when enraged he just charge at the enmy with overwhelming power that grows as his rage does. While fighting, he immediately tries to understand the opponent's fighting style and to understand it's weak points. However when he is fighting strong opponents or he is in a difficult situation, he overcome his usual boredom and eventually start to enjoy it, and when that happens he turns more like a wild beast...his attacks becomes unpredictable and his speed and ferocity increases significantly.
Also his chakra and consequently his lightnings are red.

Spoiler: show

( actually this is something i just like, im not expecting to get red chakra/lightning anyways )

credits to CaioDarT for the character image

[Manuster]

Description of the character's personality:/

Description of the character's history:/

What an emotional past(!)

[Hiruko]

much simple much wow, much kappa

[StriderOtaku]

dope character. I luv his personality

[Toratsume Nyshn]

noted
PS. Population census will b out by 14th of December (thats when my main papers will get over )

[taigakun]

much simple much wow, much kappa

nice char mein

[Fraudulent]

Welcome to the forum.
I would suggest adding some more information on your character profile.
If you need help, refer to the links in my signature, they should help you get started.

[takami]

actually is a really incomplete description, so I will try to work of the imagination to add things ... I hope it will be a decent thing because I'll use the translator

[mamita]

Damn! I like the new story!
Killed his baby brother though... That's sad D:

[StriderOtaku]

Wow. Killing his younger brother...dark, very dark.
Its wayy more interesting now.

[takami]

Thank you, in the future I will try to expand the story and make it very long and more detailed.

[takami]

UPDATED

[taigakun]

Nice work Takami. Looking forward to reading more of the chapters man
Good job

[mamita]

Damn.
That is a really good story.
I can't wait to see more!

[Leebz]

Dialogue is a little hard to follow (I assume English isn't your first language, so it's not a big issue.) but other than that, great story man.