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Author Topic: The Battle of Yoake Hill - Chapter 1  (Read 11523 times)

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Re: The Battle of Yoake Hill - Chapter 1
« Reply #15 on: November 27, 2016, 14:24:37 »
pretty good start cant wait for the next chapter
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Re: The Battle of Yoake Hill - Chapter 1
« Reply #16 on: November 27, 2016, 16:18:37 »
hahahahahah I think I have an idea as to who it is xD

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Re: The Battle of Yoake Hill - Chapter 1
« Reply #17 on: November 27, 2016, 17:24:03 »
i think it is adithya,btw good one,waiting for more.
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« Reply #18 on: November 29, 2016, 11:33:25 »
Makes me wanna write my story xD nice work noob
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Re: The Battle of Yoake Hill - Chapter 1
« Reply #19 on: November 29, 2016, 21:39:41 »
Thanks for all the compliments and critique everyone it means a lot. I am currently well into writing chapter 2, which has the first fight. Expect it in a week or so!
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Re: The Battle of Yoake Hill - Chapter 1
« Reply #20 on: November 29, 2016, 22:23:24 »
Thanks for all the compliments and critique everyone it means a lot. I am currently well into writing chapter 2, which has the first fight. Expect it in a week or so!
lel,i thought it will be there by tomorrow,well then good luck with it ^^
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« Reply #21 on: December 01, 2016, 17:27:05 »
lol they feel nice and alive
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« Reply #22 on: December 05, 2016, 23:59:13 »
Nice job it sounds really good!
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