So I took up the mic

[Leebz]

@adithya  I am always a fan of your singing ;o
I 100% support you making a full song bruh.

@Mars Life here is toxic, though quite exotic. Living every breath at my screen like I'm boxed in, sucked into the game known as Shinobi Life, it isn't real though it's just online but that's fine, smacking people in the face with Chidori but if you battle Mars I promise you'll be left sore see, he isn't weak shit 'cause he spent hours on the game, back then it was kinda lame, jousted people till he got into the hall of fame and back then Himitsu was more than a name.

So many clans and so many orgs and the game is still yet to have any lores but there is still many doors that yet to be open, game is patching to make it less broken and if you ask me, it's improving overnights even though the community gets into many fights we still live like a family just ask people about the community vs Sanji.

Aaaaand cba to continue lol. Idk if you can understand my flow or anything of it but it's pretty shitty.. yeah.. You probably wanted someone to actually make a rap and spit it on Youtube to an instrumental, right? Well give me a couple of weeks

Spoiler: show

Jk.

All together not bad. I like your flow but it's still mediocre.
You've got the basic of rhyme (some the bars were forced just so they can rhyme), but if you want to make a higher grade rap; you'd have to get deeper meanings for your lyrics and add an instrumental in the background if you're serious.

I know this was all a joke but I like to criticize, especially when it's rap.

As much as your feedback was somewhat good... This was far from something I would be proud of. It was whatever I thought of I typed. As in no editing went into it nor effort. If I wanted I could probably make something a lot better but quite frankly there would be no point seeing as:
1. Reading a rap compared to hearing one is different. You wouldn't understand if I was getting skippy, changing it up or understand most of the play on words.
2. I don't care enough about SLO (No offence to the die hard fans) to make something serious... Nor would it be possible to make something meaningful when it comes to this sort of subject... It's a pre-alpha game, not a heart-aching life story.
3. Rap isn't something I religiously do, it's a hobby. I don't aim to seek praise from anyone here.. Especially you of all people (No offence bud.. But you're not someone I consider close to at all... even online standards.)

Thanks anyway dude but I won't be making a debut album anytime soon.. No need to add an instrumental.. Lol.

[Fraudulent]

3. Rap isn't something I religiously do, it's a hobby. I don't aim to seek praise from anyone here.. Especially you of all people (No offence bud.. But you're not someone I consider close to at all... even online standards.)

Thanks anyway dude but I won't be making a debut album anytime soon.. No need to add an instrumental.. Lol.

It's true we went a long way and things didn't turn out well, but I'm rather surprised you still hold a grudge about that.
I don't want to go too much off topic but I tried reviving the relationship w/you considering how much I've changed since the last time we spoke, but looks like you're not on the receiving end.


Anyway, it's fine that you do this as a hobby and I respect that. Already said I knew this wasn't serious.

[Mars]

im on slo and my name is mars
im about to drop the sickest bars

my friends name is ken and he's about to drop some rhymes
he's been arrested seven times

i got a buddy his name is nova
he's kinda serious he ain't a joka

my homie remi likes to say anus
thanks to roguhanta he's now famous

limits is good right now yeah he's in yaiken
but not in full game because he's not asian

my tight buddy his name is sir troll
we also like to call him monsieur old

my homie shivraj is a leader of kata
he's a solemn fellow who has no need for chatter

don't forget darth who always smokes
i bet he does weed, maybe even coke

let's talk about sanji who likes his women
he gets them so wet they go swimmin

don't forget cedie, he makes soaps
the younger generations are the ones he gropes

what about snoopy, he has kids in his cellar
are they his slaves? he says "fucking hella!"

[mamoudou52404]

PLOT TWIST: Thats actually me singing... I told @adithya to make this post cuz i was too scared

@adithya  I am always a fan of your singing ;o
I 100% support you making a full song bruh.

@Mars Life here is toxic, though quite exotic. Living every breath at my screen like I'm boxed in, sucked into the game known as Shinobi Life, it isn't real though it's just online but that's fine, smacking people in the face with Chidori but if you battle Mars I promise you'll be left sore see, he isn't weak shit 'cause he spent hours on the game, back then it was kinda lame, jousted people till he got into the hall of fame and back then Himitsu was more than a name.

So many clans and so many orgs and the game is still yet to have any lores but there is still many doors that yet to be open, game is patching to make it less broken and if you ask me, it's improving overnights even though the community gets into many fights we still live like a family just ask people about the community vs Sanji.

Aaaaand cba to continue lol. Idk if you can understand my flow or anything of it but it's pretty shitty.. yeah.. You probably wanted someone to actually make a rap and spit it on Youtube to an instrumental, right? Well give me a couple of weeks

Spoiler: show

Jk.

lmfaooo the community vs Sanji? nice bars tho @Leebz

rap battle me i bet i cud kill u

Spoiler: show

jk im not a rapper

im on slo and my name is mars
im about to drop the sickest bars

my friends name is ken and he's about to drop some rhymes
he's been arrested seven times

i got a buddy his name is nova
he's kinda serious he ain't a joka

my homie remi likes to say anus
thanks to roguhanta he's now famous

limits is good right now yeah he's in yaiken
but not in full game because he's not asian

my tight buddy his name is sir troll
we also like to call him monsieur old

my homie shivraj is a leader of kata
he's a solemn fellow who has no need for chatter

don't forget darth who always smokes
i bet he does weed, maybe even coke

let's talk about sanji who likes his women
he gets them so wet they go swimmin

don't forget cedie, he makes soaps
the younger generations are the ones he gropes

what about snoopy, he has kids in his cellar
are they his slaves? he says "fucking hella!"

don't forget cedie, he makes soaps
the younger generations are the ones he gropes

lmfaoooo

[adithya]

Holy shit xD.
Thanks to all the positive feedbacks.
Those raps are FKIN lit tho xD

[taigakun]

Spoiler: show

yes ripped off taiga

wat a nuub

[Toratsume Nyshn]

oh I wish I could help you with voice modulation Adi! You got potential
Looking forward to it ^_^

[DarthTyrael]

my name is darth, sup
i don't rap well, however...
many haiku lolz

I'm just fucking around here. Can't possibly stand a chance against all of your sick rhymes.

[Manuster]

+rep for limits
+rep for leebz
+rep for mars
+rep for darth

[adithya]

@Toratsume Nyshn  Thanks man
@DarthTyrael  11/10

[adithya]

Exactly what the title says. I've been told, and I know i got dem singing skillz Unfortunately though, I start sucking when it comes to being recorded. but hey, I plan on getting better. Here's a little taste:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HhMDCAL0uAY&feature=youtu.be

EDIT

So I finally got done making the video

[Mars]

Awesome adi, sometimes it seems like you're being a bit shy.
But otherwise it's pretty fucking awesome man, just go balls in on some parts

[adithya]

Awesome adi, sometimes it seems like you're being a bit shy.
But otherwise it's pretty fucking awesome man, just go balls in on some parts

Thanks man. I shall go balls in next time :3

[Toratsume Nyshn]

Its good
I especially liked the way you modified the high screech
Gotta need to work on the modulation ..... keep working hard

[Kai]

Sounds good, can't wait to hear more.

Keep going at it.