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Tasko
« on: April 28, 2016, 11:16:17 »
Name :Tasko
Age :16
Gender :Male
Height :1.7m
Weight :68kg
Hairstyle :Messy
Facial hair :None
Hair color:White
Eye color :Light blue
Blood type :A+
Primary chakra nature :Fire Release
Hidden Village :Hidden Snow
Clan :None
Good or evil at heart?:EVIL



Description of the character personality:Lazy,his nocturnal,anti-social,He bends the rules, but doesn't break them and his not a team player.

Description of character's history:Hashiko and Akame lived outside the Hidden Snow village.They didn't belong in a village nor a clan because they want to live in peace without rules and responsibilities. Hashiko and Akame will soon be parents,Akame is 9 months pregnant and she is about to give birth.One winter morning Akame was dizzy and laid down on her bed to rest. Hashiko was in the forest gathering wood.Suddenly Hashiko heard Akame screaming in pain and he ran as fast as he can,but the snow was too thick so he infused his chakra to his feet to run on the snow.Hashiko ran to Akame's room and saw blood  under the door,in despair he opened the door and saw Akame's body parts scattered all over the room.Hashiko entered the room with his hand infront of his mouth as he gagged,he saw his baby covered in Akame's blood.Hashiko couldn't believe that his own son killed his mother,Hashiko screamed out Tasko meaning heartless killer.Hashiko stared at Tasko and committed suicide.



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Re: Tasko
« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2016, 11:56:32 »
Ehmm.. did the freshborn baby kill a full fledged shinobi?
If so, you might want to take another look at that.

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Re: Tasko
« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2016, 13:01:19 »
Ehmm.. did the freshborn baby kill a full fledged shinobi?
If so, you might want to take another look at that.

Seems like it, but it's not just killed, but completely destroyed (Body parts lying all over the place.)
Such a savage baby. /s

Anyways, somewhat interesting character.
Idk if I agree with making everything bold, but that's up to you.
Decently done, Chakra.



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Re: Tasko
« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2016, 13:04:00 »
Oh my O.o that's....that's interesting. O.o

+ Remi, I doubt they had a full on shinobi fight xD It could simply be kekkei genkai that only worked because the mother was in an incredibly vulnerable position.  Explosion release? xD

If he explains it and it seems viable then it should be okay.


Though it does seem as if it would difficult to explain. O.o

Character design looks awesome imo
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Re: Tasko
« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2016, 17:06:54 »
@Chakra You should probably link and credit the creator of that picture, cause I think I can see a signature on the bottom right.
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Re: Tasko
« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2016, 09:09:12 »
Thx for the replies , i hope u liked the story
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Re: Tasko
« Reply #6 on: April 29, 2016, 17:21:11 »
facepalm...

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Re: Tasko
« Reply #7 on: Yesterday at 09:54:24 »
Yeah, sounds like Explosion release.
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