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Alucard "The Wanderer"
« on: April 27, 2016, 15:27:30 »
Name: Alucard
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Height: 6'2
Weight: 176 lb.
Hairstyle: Messy but normal
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Now black
Eye color: red
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Fire
Hidden Village: None
Clan: None
Good or evil at heart?: Evil and Sadistic

Description of the character's personality:
He likes to make people think he is easily beatable, usually resulting in hm getting injured badly and when he see's their true power he gets excited. But when he finds out they are really no match for him he gets sadistic, usually resulting in an opponent being massacred due to lack of entertaining him

Description of the character's history:
Alucard started as a baby, dumped in the back ways of The Hidden Hill. He soon grew up to about 3 years old, not having any parents or anyone to help him. He learned language by listening to the town folk and using context clues. He saw a squad of men leave the village, they were dressed in battle armor and looked amazing. So he followed them, silently. They soon came to a stop and suddenly one started weaving hand signs. He yelled "Water style: Water Wind Jutsu". After that that air felt humid, like tiny particles of water resided in the air and soon a big wave of water rushed in, the ninja leaped into the trees but Alucard with he slow reflexes got hit by the water and thrust into the side of a tree. He fell out cold. He woke up to see 7 shinobi fighting.3 from the village he recently left, the other from a unknown residence. The 3 slowly lost strength, power, and durability. The ninja from his village on the verge of death, Alucard jumped in front of them blocking the enemy from striking them down. A enemy said "who are you,little boy?" "i am Alucard, and you will not...". Alucard is flat on the ground a bruise on his left cheek and his clothes in shatters the dust still hovering around him. When he wakes the ninja from the village get slaughtered,one by one. The first a kunai stuck into his throat and then a fire jutsu that leaves just an eyeball. That when hits the ground splats like a bug and oozes out blood.The second one, almost winning in hand-to-hand combat but then tricked in the end. The third savagely ripped to shreds by the other ninja acting like vicious dogs.Alucard stumbles up onto his feet and tries to commence his escape. As soon as he starts running, he is grabbed by the leg and punched in the face. Once again he falls out cold. As he wakes up he see's a silhouette. Its dark figure giving him shivers and raising the hair on his back. The figure walks toward him, Alucard is tied to a chair and unable to move, the man approaches him only to find out he's a she. She brushes back his hair and wraps her arms around his neck,"So,whats your name?" She says in a friendly but barbarous way. "Why should i tell you anything" Alucard responds. She ends with "Oh young man, you wont have to, ahahahaha". Then she grabs a sharp kunai that seems to come out of nowhere and forces it into Alucard's leg. He screams a horrific scream, full of agony and pain.The torturing goes on for years eventually Alucard undergoes the change from white hair to black, which is caused by the Marie Antoinette syndrome. As the story says, Alucard somehow breaks out and tortures the woman, he then violently ends her life.Starting as a fragile white haired child and coming out as an sadistic murderer is what legends say gave Alucard his power. Alucard now wanders, from village to village, from corpse to corpse, from life to death, he wanders.

99.99 percent inspired off Alucard from Hellsing

« Last Edit: April 28, 2016, 20:27:21 by Mercury »


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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2016, 16:24:42 »
It looks alright, apart from the overpoweredness (at least in my opinion.)
Best of luck with maintaining:
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But when he finds out they are really no match for him he gets sadistic, usually resulting in an opponent being massacred due to lack of entertaining him
I'm down for people looking to get strong, but make sure you can back it up, before you get people targeting you.  :P

Will you also be making an image of your character so that people can have a better idea of what your character will look like? (Can be drawn, photoshopped or even use tools such as one on Deviantart.)
As I'm unsure what this would be, so having an image could help people.
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Hairstyle: Messy but normal

Off-topic: welcome to the forum o/



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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2016, 17:53:14 »
It looks alright, apart from the overpoweredness (at least in my opinion.)
Best of luck with maintaining:
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But when he finds out they are really no match for him he gets sadistic, usually resulting in an opponent being massacred due to lack of entertaining him
I'm down for people looking to get strong, but make sure you can back it up, before you get people targeting you.  :P

Will you also be making an image of your character so that people can have a better idea of what your character will look like? (Can be drawn, photoshopped or even use tools such as one on Deviantart.)
As I'm unsure what this would be, so having an image could help people.
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Hairstyle: Messy but normal

Off-topic: welcome to the forum o/
Umm i think if i have people targeting me it will add to my characters morals.
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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2016, 19:43:38 »
Noice but I don't think Genjutsu will cause damage in this game.

I'm not sure though, but I do think it was mentioned in the last stream.
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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2016, 20:57:54 »
Alucard is a bit of a tall order for anyone to match, tho I suppose you might get that strong once more game is released.
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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2016, 21:36:08 »
Alucard is a bit of a tall order for anyone to match, tho I suppose you might get that strong once more game is released.
well...gg
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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2016, 00:07:06 »
Noice but I don't think Genjutsu will cause damage in this game.

I'm not sure though, but I do think it was mentioned in the last stream.
not with genjutsu. Thats where the name unknown comes in
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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2016, 04:35:13 »
It started off very interesting. Liked the idea of him getting high off of opponents doing damage to him and once they did enough he would measure them by going into a frenzy like state and if they proved weak he would get bored and dispose of them.
After that it went in a weird direction in my opinion with plotholes. If you revised the last bit with more backstory I would love the idea of your character again.
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Re: Alucard "The Unknown"
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2016, 11:47:37 »
First of all welcome to SLO ^^
The character description is unique but he seems just a tiny bit overpowered.
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Re: Alucard "The Wanderer"
« Reply #9 on: April 28, 2016, 20:28:38 »
It started off very interesting. Liked the idea of him getting high off of opponents doing damage to him and once they did enough he would measure them by going into a frenzy like state and if they proved weak he would get bored and dispose of them.
After that it went in a weird direction in my opinion with plotholes. If you revised the last bit with more backstory I would love the idea of your character again.
Fixed history, thanks for the welcome.
@Reminance i plan on working on my character alot towards the release of the final game.
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Re: Alucard "The Wanderer"
« Reply #10 on: April 29, 2016, 07:57:23 »
I know this may seem like I'm nitpicking, but the Marie Antoinette syndrome is the other way around, black to white, other than that, it's a good history.
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Re: Alucard "The Wanderer"
« Reply #11 on: April 29, 2016, 13:38:39 »
@Shivraj Oh i know.
There was just no other way to get a better description since there is nothing like that
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Re: Alucard "The Wanderer"
« Reply #12 on: April 29, 2016, 16:56:13 »
*claps* lol well done i like, i like
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Re: Alucard "The Wanderer"
« Reply #13 on: May 09, 2016, 14:33:14 »
Haha "99.9% based off of Alucard"!
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Re: Alucard "The Wanderer"
« Reply #14 on: Today at 10:34:41 »
i knew a guy whose grandma had that in just a lock of her hair from when military came to the door and she thought her husband had died (he hadn't, he was just injured, he came home)
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