Dorus Suraidal

[Xremal]

(Went for more of a narrative approach, well here i go.)

Name: Dorus Suraidal
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5,8
Weight: 135lbs
Hairstyle: Layed Back Spikey hair
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Silver with a touch of Blue
Eye color: Light Blue
Blood type: A
Primary chakra nature: Water
Hidden Village: (Water Oriented Village)
Clan: Ocean Clan of the Abysmal Water God Of Creation
Good or evil at heart?: Pure Good

Description of the character's personality: Dorus is a kind hearted teen. He is fiercely loyal to those important to him and tolerates no one hurting them. Dorus shows mercy to those that have some amount of good in them, refusing to fight or harm anyone who is not evil. He attacks with a closed heart to those that are evil and his eyes grow cold and the temperature of his water jutsus drop lower to reflex the change in his heart. He attacks evil with no mercy or shred of care for the wicked person's well being. Dorus strives to remind himself of his father's righteous teachings of caring for his fellow man, despite this when he fights with no mercy he much constantly keep himself from falling into the clutches of wrath in his soul that his mother planted long ago.

Description of the character's history: Dorus was raised physically by his mother and spiritually by his father. Due to very mysterious circumstances his mother is not around, his father is more then his parent. They are best friends, father and son as well as teacher and pupil. Before Dorus's father took him into his care his Malicious mother taught him all sorts of horrible beliefs. Teaching him that no one matters and to focus only on the power he could gain that all were nothing to him, cold and heartless and focused with pure skill and precision. As a result Dorus was not halted by things such as impatience or lack of maturity. He lacked other things such as love and compassion, he was pure selfish. His blue eyes reflecting that of the coldest winter snowstorms. Dorus's mother was a skilled kunoichi that could make a area under 0 degrees with just her thoughts! Many Secrets surround the things she taught her son and that is perhaps why he adapted and controls water so easily. By events unknown Dorus met his Father who had to convince Dorus that his mother's teaching were incorrect. Following his Mother's Old training plan as well as his father's proper teachings of spiritual matters. Dorus Grew to be stronger in body and mind. With his father's blessing Dorus went on a journey to confront his mother and to learn his clan's secrets of mastery over Hydrogen and Oxygen. His mother could harness Ice-fire, ice, water, and several other feats such as cryogenic stasis which she used to maintain her young appearance. Dorus Went on a adventure to get stronger before he would come face to face with his mother, he detailed all his shinobi events in a book called "Shinobi Life Adventures"(Which are told as he plays Shinobi Life Online ^_^)

[Reminance]

This was entertaining to read.
Good job ^^

[Nova]

Interesting and original story, nice one Xremal ^.^

[Ken]

Fun to read,short and good story. Nice.

[Xremal]

Thank you, everyone for your compliments. ^_^

Edit: oddly enough nairod is backwards spelling of my real life name
Dorian. I've used nairod on a few games before too XD. Where
Did the nairod character name come from? I did not add it.

[mamita]

Hidden Ocean, or a minor village? 'Cause Kazangakure's got a coastline!