Drawings WIP

[Nas]

Started learning/practicing my drawings  so far its all meh but they'll probably get better hopefully

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Having troubles with body proportions and poses

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[lollernoob9]

:3

[Mars]

2nd picture left and 3rd picture left are great, keep at it!

[Nova]

Nice Nas

[Nas]

Thanks lads and lasses xD

[json243]

That is 10x better than any drawing that I could muster up GG XD

[Sanji]

good jop nas they look very nice.

[Nas]

tried more drawings aaandddd mistakes were made lol lots more.

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drew it again then inked it....regretted it -_-

[Lumen]

If I were to be critical, I'd say to train your understanding of proportion. The 4th one down is an excellent example demonstrating construction, but it lacks perspective. You're viewing it(4th photo, 2nd pose) from a worm's eye view, but his head is much larger than it should be.

The stance itself also feels a bit skewed as it feels more like he's tip toeing or floating in mid-air. Try looking up things like 1-3 point perspective views. You'll find some common points that can help you identify problem spots within the flow of your work.

There's also anatomy and proportion. There's a problem with the orientation of your torso and more. One thing that I notice is that it feels more like torsion, but it'd be extremely visible in cloth lines and the tight clenching rope would cause many narrow fabric lines. The center guide down the face also seems to be sort of perpendicular to the camera, but there's the back area of the skull visible on only one side.

I'd try looking at some skeleton reference and practice drawing them at different degrees so that when the time comes that you need to articulate muscle from their origin to insertion, you're able to do so without worrying too much about the underlying foundation of the body.

[Yamasukage]

:3 its pretty cool Nas keep it up

[Nova]

Looks good like usual ^.^

[Nas]

If I were to be critical, I'd say to train your understanding of proportion. The 4th one down is an excellent example demonstrating construction, but it lacks perspective. You're viewing it(4th photo, 2nd pose) from a worm's eye view, but his head is much larger than it should be.

The stance itself also feels a bit skewed as it feels more like he's tip toeing or floating in mid-air. Try looking up things like 1-3 point perspective views. You'll find some common points that can help you identify problem spots within the flow of your work.

There's also anatomy and proportion. There's a problem with the orientation of your torso and more. One thing that I notice is that it feels more like torsion, but it'd be extremely visible in cloth lines and the tight clenching rope would cause many narrow fabric lines. The center guide down the face also seems to be sort of perpendicular to the camera, but there's the back area of the skull visible on only one side.

I'd try looking at some skeleton reference and practice drawing them at different degrees so that when the time comes that you need to articulate muscle from their origin to insertion, you're able to do so without worrying too much about the underlying foundation of the body.

Thanks for the advice :3 yeaa i still have alot to work on lol

Thanks guys @Nova @Yamasukage  :3

[Lumen]

If you've got a Barnes & Nobles nearby and 20 dollars, you should grab a Grey's Anatomy book. : )

[Nas]

With all these new art post i decided to show my current progress.
Still have much to learn.
Also having problems figuring out the style of drawing i like and feel comfortable with.
But ah well patience is key or something


 


I got real frustrated with something here hence the middles finger lol.v

[lollernoob9]

XD That looks familiar, keep it up lol. I shift styles too, slightly different over time.