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Jale Himitsu
« on: November 06, 2015, 18:07:43 »
Name: Jale Himitsu

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Height: 6"1

Weight: 190lbs

Hairstyle: I don't even know lol

Facial hair: None

Hair color: Purple

Eye color: Blue

Blood type: O

Primary chakra nature: Fire

Hidden Village: Inferunogakure

Clan: Himitsu

Good or evil at heart?: Good but he has an evil side to him

Description of the character's personality: Jale likes the silence and the enjoyment of being alone... He prefers being by himself than in a large crowd, but even though he is a lone wolf he is still a very fun guy to be around because of his sense of humor

Description of the character's history: Jale was raised in a small village, in a small cottage with his mother and his little brother, Zaza. One day, his village was attacked by other greater villages and he had to flee the village with his brother. His mother was killed in the chaos, and Jale promised his mother the vendetta. While the two brothers were strolling the forest one day, a bunch of ninja jumped the two and kidnapped Jale's brother. His journey started then... At the age of 15, he visited his family members in the Hidden Fire Village, Inferunogakure, and was trained there by the elders of the village. After his training ended at 19, he decided to stay with his comrades in Inferunogakure, but he always stayed away from them and the only time he joined the others is when they are either training or sparring... Nobody knows what is going on in his head most of the time, he still thinks of the day he left his mother and hasn't let go of the vendetta he promised her

He never thought much of his brother, he had always avoided the thought of the day Zaza got kidnapped, but that would change one day when Jale was strolling the forest. Zaza attacked him and said that he hasn't forgiven Jale for abandoning him. They had a sibling showdown and it turned out that Jale had the upper hand. Jale spared him and let him go, and since that day, they have always hated each other and never saw each other for years

« Last Edit: November 06, 2015, 21:06:05 by Jale »


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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2015, 18:14:47 »
nice char,   but he is  (happy most of the time), what brother doing that while his brother kidnapped XD lol

but he is good so yeah he most be happy XD

oh i forgot to say i liked the story (:
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #2 on: November 06, 2015, 18:46:44 »
Pretty decent character, what happened to his kidnapped brother though?
Did he end up saving him or did his brother get killed?
It just said that his brother got kidnapped and then his journey started.. so I'm curious ;3



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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2015, 18:49:27 »
Pretty decent character, what happened to his kidnapped brother though?
Did he end up saving him or did his brother get killed?
It just said that his brother got kidnapped and then his journey started.. so I'm curious ;3

lol, he forgot he is lil bro and find a girl at the village that he go, so  he said fk my bro i want to live with my girl

oh and he is bro is a bitch to the ppl that kidnapped  him

jk jk jk XD
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2015, 19:21:31 »
He said being in inferno bakery was better than being alone, so we can safely assume that his brother died

Sanji, girls are all you have in your mind 24/7 xD.

Jale, I noticed a contradiction, your personality says you like being alone, but the history says you liked to stay with your family members better than being alone, the personality sections asks you for the current personality of the character.
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2015, 19:51:34 »
I only feels bad for his Brother, Kappa. Btw nice Character ^^ Like teh story ^^ (im criing because no one looks at my character. I cry evritim)



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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #6 on: November 06, 2015, 20:38:13 »
Thanks for the feedback... I've just noticed the lack of detail, I am going to fix it up soon
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #7 on: November 06, 2015, 20:39:48 »
O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #8 on: November 06, 2015, 21:31:15 »
O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD

Thing is though. It's himitsu.
If someone from himitsu got kidnapped we'd send a lot of people after that person to get him/her back.
Our clan is secretive and don't want our secrets to be leaked.
Even if someone tried to run away from Himitsu we'd send people after them to bring them back.



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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #9 on: November 06, 2015, 21:35:29 »
Sensing a Nagato sort of vibe from your character, nice.
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #10 on: November 07, 2015, 06:57:30 »
O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD

That hurts bro ;3;.

O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD

Thing is though. It's himitsu.
If someone from himitsu got kidnapped we'd send a lot of people after that person to get him/her back.
Our clan is secretive and don't want our secrets to be leaked.
Even if someone tried to run away from Himitsu we'd send people after them to bring them back.
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #11 on: November 07, 2015, 11:00:02 »
O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD

Thing is though. It's himitsu.
If someone from himitsu got kidnapped we'd send a lot of people after that person to get him/her back.
Our clan is secretive and don't want our secrets to be leaked.
Even if someone tried to run away from Himitsu we'd send people after them to bring them back.

Haha I love how its about clan secrets and not brotherly  love xD
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #12 on: November 07, 2015, 11:31:02 »
O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD

Thing is though. It's himitsu.
If someone from himitsu got kidnapped we'd send a lot of people after that person to get him/her back.
Our clan is secretive and don't want our secrets to be leaked.
Even if someone tried to run away from Himitsu we'd send people after them to bring them back.
ofc if it was a female the first one who will go it will be me........(sorry boys not interesting to help males) XD
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #13 on: November 07, 2015, 12:32:06 »
O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD

Thing is though. It's himitsu.
If someone from himitsu got kidnapped we'd send a lot of people after that person to get him/her back.
Our clan is secretive and don't want our secrets to be leaked.
Even if someone tried to run away from Himitsu we'd send people after them to bring them back.
ofc if it was a female the first one who will go it will be me........(sorry boys not interesting to help males) XD
We know you like females Sanji xD
You already told everybody when you joined..
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Re: Jale Himitsu
« Reply #14 on: November 07, 2015, 14:27:02 »
O.o more himitsus lol pfft who needs brothers anyways xD

Thing is though. It's himitsu.
If someone from himitsu got kidnapped we'd send a lot of people after that person to get him/her back.
Our clan is secretive and don't want our secrets to be leaked.
Even if someone tried to run away from Himitsu we'd send people after them to bring them back.
ofc if it was a female the first one who will go it will be me........(sorry boys not interesting to help males) XD

And here I thought you had my back... x3. No love for bros?
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