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Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« on: August 08, 2015, 12:43:30 »

Name: Shadow Sword
Compatible With:Any ninjutsu user.Unlike other legendary swords this one is unique in his own way,any ninjutsu user can use this sword.
Story:There was a strong warrior named Owari who wanted an opponent that equals him in strenght.For over a decade he walked the earth to find a good challenge.All ninjas who challenged him failed, they were just too easy for him.One day he heared a about a legend that a beast was walking the forest, and people who enter that forest never come back so he went to check.After hours of walking a fierce scream teared down the trees and a beast appeared,it was a beast who could destroy an entire village but there was something strange it was a shadow, The Shadow Beast Hageshīdesu.After hours of fighting,Owari was lying on the ground, before beast giving him the final blow he saw that Owari was smiling, a second later Owari started to laugh, he put all the strenght he had in his sword and gave the beast final blow than he said: "Finally something fun."But he saw that all the beast power went into the sword as the sword became a Shadow Sword.
Notes:The user of this sword becomes a shadow.
To obtain this sword you need to defeat in game NPC Owari, who is very difficult to defeat(A simple jonin can;t).He is location changes as it is walking random in the forest.
Sword Powers:Defensive:The user of this sword turn into a shadow form that can hit,use ninjutsu basically all that a normal body can do but can't be hit by physical attacks(taijutsu,kunai,sword,punch etc)because the form will dodge them, but it can be hit by ninjutsu and genjutsu.
Offensive:The enemy who is cut by sword form a shadow around the wound that slowly drains chakra, but the more wounds it have the faster they drain chakra.The drained chackra by the shadows goes not to his user, but to the Shadow Sword who will grow bigger,stronger.Shadow Sword have no capacity to how much chakra can drain.Chakra doesn;t decrease over time and keep sword the same as you collect more chakra the sword becomes stronger.If the user is killed all the chakra you collected dissapears.
Special: At 100+ Kills with sword it grows strong enough to kill ninjas under jonin rank with 1 hit.
At 1000+ Kills it is strong enough to take on average jonin with 1 hit.
Credits:I was inspired by Leebz.
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« Last Edit: August 08, 2015, 18:35:29 by mariusx2014 »


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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2015, 17:05:31 »
Seems very much like Owari and you have some interesting differences on death...*see quote under your gender*.

Other than that..not bad I guess, but I think you could use some more detail as to how the Shadow Sword works. Does it draw on one's chakra, if so, does it do so manually or automatically (Does it drain you if you hold it, much like the Castlevania whip)? Also, what are you implying by the sword "turning you into a shadow"...? Do you become a shadow on the ground, a shadow form that passes through objects, or an OP shadow-form that can hit without being hit?
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2015, 18:20:31 »
Thanks for that good suggestions, i will work more on this and update.  :D
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2015, 21:09:23 »
This is actually really nice. Good to see a good lore behind a legendary weapon. Though once one player has defeated Owari will the NPC dissapear?
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2015, 22:10:36 »
Well if a player defeat Owari(very unlikely because is so stronk) that means he kill him so he will never spawn again on the respective server.After that the only way you can obtain the sword is by killing his current owner, but won't be easy  :P.
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #5 on: August 09, 2015, 16:28:16 »
I LOVE THIS WEAPON. But if it's going to be a stealth weapon, shouldn't it be short and made to assassinate, like the swords that ANBU members use? I would think that that's better, but I love the idea
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #6 on: August 09, 2015, 18:52:36 »
@Kayleb  Thanks very much i will consider than when i will make updates to the sword.
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #7 on: August 11, 2015, 01:16:00 »
This also looks great!
Everybody is coming up with idea's for Legendary weapons.
Maybe i should too hmmm...
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #8 on: August 11, 2015, 02:12:05 »
I really would like this weapon to be put into the game, I like the story and how the sword would be shadowy, shoot if its short for anbu use, I would definitely go after the sword as quick as possible.
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #9 on: August 11, 2015, 09:09:58 »
Thanks it's good to hear that you like it.
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #10 on: August 11, 2015, 10:49:34 »
I like it! Though it would make more sense to me if the sword was looooooong! :)
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #11 on: August 11, 2015, 18:41:10 »
I like it! Though it would make more sense to me if the sword was looooooong! :)

Why long? That's not very good for stealth
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Re: Legendary Weapon -Shadow Sword
« Reply #12 on: August 12, 2015, 11:10:37 »
I like it! Though it would make more sense to me if the sword was looooooong! :)

Why long? That's not very good for stealth
As ive read, its not exactly for kill fast and run, but for torchering ur enemy, so it should be a tad bit longer than Ichigo's bankai(he fake one he has in anime, not dual one he uses later on)
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