Himitsu Trilogy: The Next Generation

[bloberfish]

leebz im begging u, dont leave me out of the war!!! Even if i'm injured, i would never lie back while the rest of the clan are working their asses off for our pride, I will not sit back!!!!!

[Leebz]

Chapter 14

[Hidden Snow Village, Outskirts]
3:30PM, Day 2
Yundama

The fields on the outskirts of Hidden Snow were very, very vast. The landscape had mid-length grass that was covered in light snow and reached the top of Yundama's ankles and there was a couple of flower patches that grew in cold climate. It was dead quiet, with the only sound being the wind blowing lightly through the air.
"Found anything?" Hari asked questionably to Yundama as they scouted the area for the enemy.
"Nothing yet." Yundama replied disappointedly.
The two climbed back on top of Minshi and began to ride off to the next location the rogues were spotted.

"Hey, I was thinking.." Hari begun to speak.
"..If they were heading towards the Snow, do you think they could be launching an attack?" He continued to explain his theory but Yundama shook his head.
"They wouldn't be so reckless to try that. They sounds like a bunch of thieves more than an organised rogue group. Most likely they are based close to the village where they can ambush.. I think I know where to look." Yundama realised that the group would be based close to one of the village gates so they could ambush much easier. There was a cave not too far from the Hidden Snow that would overlook the east gate.

As they arrived, they decided to do a stake out and wait for the men to come out.
When Yundama realised this was not working, with no one leaving or entering the Snow, he decided to summon one of his smaller boars to scope out the area.
"Summoning Jutsu!" Yundama yelled an a tiny boar appeared.
The boar was small enough to carry with one hand. It was light brown with a dark brown spot on its back. Yundama rarely summoned this boar as it was so young but it was perfect for scouting ahead.
"Please, scope that cave and report back here. Remember, two oink's if you see someone, one oink if it is empty."

The boar began to stroll over to the cave where it was ordered to go and as it reached nearer to the entrance, it could see two men inside.
As it turned to report back a third man picked him up.
"Look boys! Dinner!" He yelled as he went into the cave.
The men laughed as the small boar wriggled around in panic. "It barely has any meat on him!" one of the men shouted.

They bound the small boar to a stick using vines to tie it's hooves.
They begun to try lighting a fire as the boar squealed for help.
"Put.. The boar.. Down." Yundama said slowly, holding a kunai to one of the men's throats.
The man gulped as he dropped the boar and the other two men stood, holding kunai of their own.
"Hari.. If you will.." Yundama said firmly.
Hari grinned as he took a deep breath and without weaving hand signs, begun to breath fire towards the two men, knocking them out whilst leaving them pretty burned.

Yundama pushed the last man towards Hari, which Hari bound him and the other two men whilst Yundama untied the small boar, relieving him of his duty and returning him to his home.
Yundama looked at the third man who was now bound.
"Tell us, who told you to do this." Yundama spoke to the man as Minshi walked towards him.
"Fuck you!" the man spued.
"You know, that boar you was going to eat was a dear friend of the one who is right next to you.." Yundama explained.
"..He doesn't take lightly to people who eat boars.. He believes in an eye for an eye." Yundama continued as Minshi began to open wide to bite the man's head off.
"Okay! Okay! It was the head of Katakiuchi! Please! Call the beast off!" The man began to beg.
"Minshi. Enough." Yundama called Minshi off and just like that, Minshi stopped.
Yundama and Hari begun loading the men on top of Minshi and took them to the Hidden Snow where they picked up their reward and left them for further questioning. The two began their long journey home.

[Shivraj]

Hmmmm....... Nice chapter, but why you putting a filler here? ;-; XD JK man, loved it, but why would Kata send a few thieves to Hidden snow? To piss Rogu off?

[adithya]

Could you give us a chronology? Does the legacy come before the clan history? or after? and is the next generation second in the trilogy?
 

[Mars]

youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ

[Leebz]

Could you give us a chronology? Does the legacy come before the clan history? or after? and is the next generation second in the trilogy?
 

That depends on if you're talking history or backstory.
The Legacy story was based during the time Himitsus home village, place of birth, was raided and destroyed by bigger nations, forcing the Himitsu to travel over lands finding refuge in small groups that were split up. In Legacy you follow the group that the head of the family was apart of. In it he is unaware that other Himitsu survived and was also looking for refuge (However, none of my work follows them. Though you may see some mention of this in other members character history)

This story follows a few years after where Himitsu found settlement in Hidden Thunder but also migrated all over. This is where everyones characters are living and breathing as they are. So you can call "Next Gen"present day whereas Legacy was set roughly in the era of Himitsu becoming refugees and looking for a new village (Which ends up being Hidden Thunder.)

For those who have read Legacy, it actually was never finished and ended abruptly as I was a very new writer with little skill in plot writing and it hadn't had many fans.

I hope this clears things up for ya

[Sanji]

Chapter 14

[Hidden Snow Village, Outskirts]
3:30PM, Day 2
Yundama

The fields on the outskirts of Hidden Snow were very, very vast. The landscape had mid-length grass that was covered in light snow and reached the top of Yundama's ankles and there was a couple of flower patches that grew in cold climate. It was dead quiet, with the only sound being the wind blowing lightly through the air.
"Found anything?" Hari asked questionably to Yundama as they scouted the area for the enemy.
"Nothing yet." Yundama replied disappointedly.
The two climbed back on top of Minshi and began to ride off to the next location the rogues were spotted.

"Hey, I was thinking.." Hari begun to speak.
"..If they were heading towards the Snow, do you think they could be launching an attack?" He continued to explain his theory but Yundama shook his head.
"They wouldn't be so reckless to try that. They sounds like a bunch of thieves more than an organised rogue group. Most likely they are based close to the village where they can ambush.. I think I know where to look." Yundama realised that the group would be based close to one of the village gates so they could ambush much easier. There was a cave not too far from the Hidden Snow that would overlook the east gate.

As they arrived, they decided to do a stake out and wait for the men to come out.
When Yundama realised this was not working, with no one leaving or entering the Snow, he decided to summon one of his smaller boars to scope out the area.
"Summoning Jutsu!" Yundama yelled an a tiny boar appeared.
The boar was small enough to carry with one hand. It was light brown with a dark brown spot on its back. Yundama rarely summoned this boar as it was so young but it was perfect for scouting ahead.
"Please, scope that cave and report back here. Remember, two oink's if you see someone, one oink if it is empty."

The boar began to stroll over to the cave where it was ordered to go and as it reached nearer to the entrance, it could see two men inside.
As it turned to report back a third man picked him up.
"Look boys! Dinner!" He yelled as he went into the cave.
The men laughed as the small boar wriggled around in panic. "It barely has any meat on him!" one of the men shouted.

They bound the small boar to a stick using vines to tie it's hooves.
They begun to try lighting a fire as the boar squealed for help.
"Put.. The boar.. Down." Yundama said slowly, holding a kunai to one of the men's throats.
The man gulped as he dropped the boar and the other two men stood, holding kunai of their own.
"Hari.. If you will.." Yundama said firmly.
Hari grinned as he took a deep breath and without weaving hand signs, begun to breath fire towards the two men, knocking them out whilst leaving them pretty burned.

Yundama pushed the last man towards Hari, which Hari bound him and the other two men whilst Yundama untied the small boar, relieving him of his duty and returning him to his home.
Yundama looked at the third man who was now bound.
"Tell us, who told you to do this." Yundama spoke to the man as Minshi walked towards him.
"Fuck you!" the man spued.
"You know, that boar you was going to eat was a dear friend of the one who is right next to you.." Yundama explained.
"..He doesn't take lightly to people who eat boars.. He believes in an eye for an eye." Yundama continued as Minshi began to open wide to bite the man's head off.
"Okay! Okay! It was the head of Katakiuchi! Please! Call the beast off!" The man began to beg.
"Minshi. Enough." Yundama called Minshi off and just like that, Minshi stopped.
Yundama and Hari begun loading the men on top of Minshi and took them to the Hidden Snow where they picked up their reward and left them for further questioning. The two began their long journey home.

Good story, btw I was waiting the war. Why did u cut off the story in the coolest part ):

[Xassassin]

I like the way leebz makes you wait it out, there are many people in himitsu so of course you jump around a bit to tell their story instead of just focusing on one. This isnt just a story about the war but about everyone and how they interact with each other in their daily lives. Im sure next chapter will continue with the war bit or it might not.

[Sanji]

I like the way leebz makes you wait it out, there are many people in himitsu so of course you jump around a bit to tell their story instead of just focusing on one. This isnt just a story about the war but about everyone and how they interact with each other in their daily lives. Im sure next chapter will continue with the war bit or it might not.

ik that   what i want to say is the chapter of blob got beat i want the next one the war one that what i am waiting for ik it is not all about war i just liked that chapter a lot it was so good (:

[Leebz]

Chapter 15

[Hidden Forest, Himitsu Meeting Hall]
1:30PM, Day 5
Onimaro

Onimaro stood up to talk to the crowd of Himitsu in front of him with his wife, Mika by his side and his children sat in the front row, being Genin they had the right to be at the meetings. A lot of these Himitsu had travelled from distant lands due to the importance of the meeting that was about to take place. The hall was vast and had mats for the members to sit on and a small stage-like platform for Onimaro to stand on to address the members.

"You all know why you are here.." Onimaro began to speak with strictness in his voice, strictness and anger.
"..We find ourselves looking at disrespect from the Kirishima Clan, such disrespect that Arashi has paid dearly for their actions." Onimaro continued and went on to explain the dire situation that Arashi was left in, remembering the look of his friend laying in the hospital bed in a critical state.

"So, who are we sending to repay the favour?" a voice from the back said, and the member stood at attention.
"Kenshin." Onimaro recognised the member standing up from his mat.
"Master of the sword, Jonin and free of duty for the past couple of days. Are you itching for combat, brother?" Onimaro asked him with such seriousness, the room awaited Kenshin's response.
Kenshin was 5'10" and had a black outfit similar to Yundama's but with a short sleeve shirt and red trimmings. He had short brown hair that spiked in different directions and never left home without his sword.
"Yes, sir. Though, I will not take on this task without my sister, Satomi." Kenshin finally responded to the question. Satomi was his younger sister. She was a medical ninja and had black, long hair with an outfit of the reverse colours to her brother. She also stood up alongside her brother with a serious look on her face.
"Very well, in which case I am sending a friendly face with you as well. Kamiko, please rise." Onimaro ordered and with no hesitation, stood Kamiko Himitsu, ANBU to the village Hidden in Ash and skilled member of the Himitsu Clan. Kamiko wore a face mask and had long black hair she wore in a ponytail with a side braid. Her hair had red, dyed ends and she had the clan emblem tattooed on her left arm.

After a long explanation of their mission to hunt down the members of Kirishima that hurt Arashi badly, the three went to talk battle strategies. Onimaro took his family home after the meeting was over.
"Are you sure those three will be okay?" Mika questioned her husband, worried more pain will come to the Himitsu from this.
"I have complete faith in the members of our clan and trust they will be fine. Afterall, I selected Fire Style users who have vast knowledge in jutsu which can counter the Kirishima's fire and two of them have unlocked their second nature already." Onimaro spoke, easing his wife's worried mind.
Onimaro smiled at his wife, wrapping an arm around her to comfort her as they reached their home.
The boys went to Kurais room to speak of their first clan meeting whilst their parents started to make lunch.

After lunch was done and over with, the family decided to go check on the three and see what strategies they had come up with and met them in the local park. Onimaro normally didn't allow the boys to come to stuff like meetings or battle plans but thought as they are now Genin, they had to learn the ropes so kept them close by at times like this.

"Onimaro, hey." Kenshin spoke with gratitude in his voice over being selected for this clan mission.
"I see you brought the boys along?" He said whilst seeing the two boys grinning, wearing their headbands with pride.
Onimaro nodded and smiled at the two whilst Mika asked the others of their plans thus far.

Kenshin took Onimaro aside and asked him something Onimaro didn't quite expect.
"As grateful as I am for being selected, I must ask. Why didn't you decide to take this on yourself with Mika?"
Onimaro looked at him and then at the boys. "As much as I want to get revenge with my own hands, I have the family to watch. I fear the Kirishima may target them next. I want to make sure nothing happens to them, I won't allow anything to harm them."
Kenshin could tell that Onimaro had anger in his voice and fell quiet. Onimaro noticed this and gave a quick smile.
"Anyway, I know you'll take them down for me. I believe in your abilities, Kenshin. As well as your sisters and Kamikos."

[Reminance]

Chapter 15

[Hidden Forest, Himitsu Meeting Hall]
1:30PM, Day 5
Onimaro

Onimaro stood up to talk to the crowd of Himitsu in front of him with his wife, Mika by his side and his children sat in the front row, being Genin they had the right to be at the meetings. A lot of these Himitsu had travelled from distant lands due to the importance of the meeting that was about to take place. The hall was vast and had mats for the members to sit on and a small stage-like platform for Onimaro to stand on to address the members.

"You all know why you are here.." Onimaro began to speak with strictness in his voice, strictness and anger.
"..We find ourselves looking at disrespect from the Kirishima Clan, such disrespect that Arashi has paid dearly for their actions." Onimaro continued and went on to explain the dire situation that Arashi was left in, remembering the look of his friend laying in the hospital bed in a critical state.

"So, who are we sending to repay the favour?" a voice from the back said, and the member stood at attention.
"Kenshin." Onimaro recognised the member standing up from his mat.
"Master of the sword, Jonin and free of duty for the past couple of days. Are you itching for combat, brother?" Onimaro asked him with such seriousness, the room awaited Kenshin's response.
Kenshin was 5'10" and had a black outfit similar to Yundama's but with a short sleeve shirt and red trimmings. He had short brown hair that spiked in different directions and never left home without his sword.
"Yes, sir. Though, I will not take on this task without my sister, Satomi." Kenshin finally responded to the question. Satomi was his younger sister. She was a medical ninja and had black, long hair with an outfit of the reverse colours to her brother. She also stood up alongside her brother with a serious look on her face.
"Very well, in which case I am sending a friendly face with you as well. Kamiko, please rise." Onimaro ordered and with no hesitation, stood Kamiko Himitsu, ANBU to the village Hidden in Ash and skilled member of the Himitsu Clan. Kamiko wore a face mask and had long black hair she wore in a ponytail with a side braid. Her hair had red, dyed ends and she had the clan emblem tattooed on her left arm.

After a long explanation of their mission to hunt down the members of Kirishima that hurt Arashi badly, the three went to talk battle strategies. Onimaro took his family home after the meeting was over.
"Are you sure those three will be okay?" Mika questioned her husband, worried more pain will come to the Himitsu from this.
"I have complete faith in the members of our clan and trust they will be fine. Afterall, I selected Fire Style users who have vast knowledge in jutsu which can counter the Kirishima's fire and two of them have unlocked their second nature already." Onimaro spoke, easing his wife's worried mind.
Onimaro smiled at his wife, wrapping an arm around her to comfort her as they reached their home.
The boys went to Kurais room to speak of their first clan meeting whilst their parents started to make lunch.

After lunch was done and over with, the family decided to go check on the three and see what strategies they had come up with and met them in the local park. Onimaro normally didn't allow the boys to come to stuff like meetings or battle plans but thought as they are now Genin, they had to learn the ropes so kept them close by at times like this.

"Onimaro, hey." Kenshin spoke with gratitude in his voice over being selected for this clan mission.
"I see you brought the boys along?" He said whilst seeing the two boys grinning, wearing their headbands with pride.
Onimaro nodded and smiled at the two whilst Mika asked the others of their plans thus far.

Kenshin took Onimaro aside and asked him something Onimaro didn't quite expect.
"As grateful as I am for being selected, I must ask. Why didn't you decide to take this on yourself with Mika?"
Onimaro looked at him and then at the boys. "As much as I want to get revenge with my own hands, I have the family to watch. I fear the Kirishima may target them next. I want to make sure nothing happens to them, I won't allow anything to harm them."
Kenshin could tell that Onimaro had anger in his voice and fell quiet. Onimaro noticed this and gave a quick smile.
"Anyway, I know you'll take them down for me. I believe in your abilities, Kenshin. As well as your sisters and Kamikos."

Good chapter although action was left out.
I know not every chapter needs action xD

[Shivraj]

Holy Crap, this is getting exciting :3

[Sanji]

nice chapter, the next one will be super awesome!!

[bloberfish]

you can do it guys!!!

[Sage32801]

just caught up with the chapters and they is amazing
i wish i could've help my friend Arashi