Himitsu Trilogy: The Next Generation

[Shivraj]

Chapter 3

[Hidden Forest Village, Ninja Academy]
7:30AM, Day 1
Kurai

Kurai walked into the classroom with his brother where all the students were chatting amongst themselves, waiting for their teacher.
He walked in and saw two seats next to each other. "Over here Kazuki."
The boys walked over to the seats whilst looking around the room.
The classroom was decorated with inspirational posters such as dedicating to being a ninja and dedication to learning. A big blackboard was at the front of the classroom with the words "Please sit in silence and wait for your teacher." Kurai noticed this and saw some students sitting quietly whilst others sat on the tables and spoke loudly. Kazuki also noticed this and was already sat down, facing forward and quiet as a mouse. Kurai copied his younger brother as they waited patiently for the teacher.

A student to the left of them whispered to them "You guys are from the Himitsu, right?"
"Yeah, why?" Kazuki asked the boy.
"I notice the clan logo on your back. My father says it is a must to learn the names of all the clans within our village." The boy stated.
"My name is Yuki, I migrated from the Hidden Snow when I was a little boy." The boy followed up on his previous statement.
Yuki was blonde with spiked hair. He dressed in a big jacket with a fur hood even though it was pretty warm out. He had clan marks on his cheeks, 2 stripes on one and three on the other. He was a born leader and seemed to be popular amongst the class.

A few minutes later the teacher arrived in a puff of smoke, causing the students to rush to their seats and be silent.
"I have been here for a while, observing each and every one of you to see what you'd do with this." He pointed towards the message on the blackboard.
"Can anyone tell me what this is?" The room fell silent as the students stared at the message.
Kurai raised his hand and replied "It's an order."
The teacher grinned. "That it is.." The teacher paused and waited for Kurai to reply with his name.
"Kurai." He replied quickly.
"Good Job Kurai, I have heard much about you and your brother already. I am Mr. Kurama."
The students watched as he wrote his name on the board.

The lesson went on for an hour until the bell rang. They weren't taught much after the introduction. Just basic chakra, how to use it and what it was.
"Not bad for a first day, right bro?"Kurai said with a big grin, putting his hands on the back of his head.
Kazuki laughed. "You got that right. You completely nailed that question about the order!"
They both started laughing as they walked home.

As they got home they noticed a note on the table that read "Summoned by the Kage. Will be back soon. Go to your uncles house till we get back as he is currently in the village for a few weeks. - Love Mom and Dad."
"Aww man! Not Uncle Remi!" Kazuki said disappointedly
Kurai laughed. "He isn't that bad. Come on."

The boys walked down the path in the Himitsu estate which led them to their uncles place, Reminance.
"Do you think he knows we're coming?" Kazuki asked.
"Probably, mom and dad are pretty organized like that." Kurai answered.

The Himitsu estate in the Hidden Forest was not too big as it was rare for members to be in the Hidden Forest. It had a wall surrounding it with a few wooden houses for any Himitsu members wanting residency. It also had many plants and flowers in little patches. The Himitsu had estates all over the lands as a lot of them didn't want to settle in the Hidden Thunder and with references from the Kage of the Hidden Thunder the other villages couldn't turn them away due to the law stating that all members of different villages had migration rights.

The brothers arrived at the door of their uncles and knocked, awaiting an answer.
Foot steps were heard walking towards the door as it slid open.
"Kurai! Kazuki! I have been expecting you! Come in!" Reminance welcomed the two boys with open arms into his home.

I love remi! D: xD nice one!

[Reminance]

xD shivraj :3

[Xassassin]

What are they going to do with their uncle remi? lol, I wonder if he will teach them anything that will help them become stronger.

[Reminance]

What are they going to do with their uncle remi? lol, I wonder if he will teach them anything that will help them become stronger.

hope so to.

[Shivraj]

I'l probably tie him up to shut him up, seeing as I hate him in the story, and the tying up someone to shut them up is in my character, but I like remi irl :3

[Xassassin]

I'l probably tie him up to shut him up, seeing as I hate him in the story, and the tying up someone to shut them up is in my character, but I like remi irl :3

Well damn lol, I can't wait until the next chapter that's for sure.

[Shivraj]

Neither can I xD, let's see how Leebz makes my character!

[Leebz]

Chapter 4

[Hidden Forest Village, Kage's Office]
7:30AM, Day 1
Mika

Mika stood at attention with her comrades, awaiting the orders of the Kage.
The Kage begun to speak. "I have called you three here for an assignment. It's an S Rank mission that would fit you three perfectly."
He handed a scroll containing their assignment and they all read it over.
Mika was unfazed by the request. It was an order to go after a rogue ninja. One that had stolen a forbidden jutsu from the village library. The Hidden Forest was known for it's vast collection of forbidden jutsu within its large library so when she read that a ninja decided to go rogue and steal one she was not surprised.
"We will retrieve this jutsu and bring the rogue back. If we cannot bring him back we will make sure he pays with his life." Onimaro stated.
The other two nodded in agreement to what Onimaro said.
"Very well, go now." The Kage said as the team scattered.

"Where should we look first?" Mika asked the others.
"It says he was last spotted leaving the east gate so my guess is he is heading for the docks to escape to the Hidden Snow." Kiyoshi said quickly as they jumped from tree to tree heading in the right direction.
"Let's pick up the pace." Onimaro ordered in a serious tone.

After some time travelling they caught up with the now rogue ninja with a scroll attached to his side.
Kiyoshi yelled as he did a mid air round house kick to the ninja, knocking him into a tree but to his disappointment it was a substitution.
"So they sent you three after me, hmm?" The ninja asked from his tree branch.
"Just come back quietly, Yagami." Mika shouted at the rogue.
Yagami cackled hysterically as he weaved hand signs.
Onimaro and Kiyoshi moved lightning fast, drawing their swords infused with chakra and sliced at Yagami's hands.
"Fuuuuuuck!" Yagami yelled out as his hands dropped to the floor.
"Mika." Onimaro said calmly whilst wiping the blood from his blade.
"I'm on it." Mika responded whilst using her medical ninjutsu to stop the blood as she bandaged him up.

After a few moments, Yagami passed out and the team took him back to the Hidden Forest along with the jutsu.
After their travel back they dropped him off at the prison and went to tell the Kage what happened.
"Good work. I knew I could leave it to you three. You are all relieved." The Kage said with a congratulating tone.

The couple said farewell to Kiyoshi and headed to pick up their sons from Remi's home.
They knocked on his door and heard little footsteps run to answer. "Mom!" the boys yelled and hugged their mother tightly, happy to see their parents home safe.
"What about me?" Onimaro joked with the boys as they laughed and went to hug him too.

"Were they any trouble?" Mika asked Remi.
Remi laughed in response. "Not at all! They were great company, I was happy to have them here. It was good to see the little rascals. They've grown so much since I last saw them."
Mika smiled "They sure have. We must be going now but thanks again."
He nodded and showed the family to the door. "Take care now."
"See you soon bro." Onimaro said giving him a fist bump.
Remi smiled. "Don't be a stranger now."
The two hugged quickly before leaving for home.

[jcryer]

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Wow... This is really good!

[Reminance]

And another delightful chapter ^___^

[Shivraj]

Nice! Loved it, as I did the other chapters

[Leebz]

Chapter 5

[Hidden Forest Village, Home of Onimaro]
4:00PM, Day 1
Kazuki

Mika was reading until she heard a knock at the door and went to answer it.
"Hey Kurai and Kazuki's mom! Can Kurai and Kazuki come and play?" Yuki asked as more children waited a few steps behind.
Mika smiled sweetly at the children. "Of course, I can't see why not."
Mika called for her sons and they rushed to see their friends at the door.
"Be home in 2 hours and no leaving the village." She said sternly to the group.
"Okay mom!" Kazuki said as they all ran off to play.

Kazuki and the others walked down the dirt path talking about the lesson they had today.
"I know!" Yuki shouted. "We should go to the southern gate den!"
The group seemed to know what he meant except for Kazuki and Kurai.
"The southern gate den?" Kurai questioned his friends.
"Yeah! It was made by a few of us a while back! We play ninja in there!" Yuki shouted, still as loud as ever.
Yuki loved to be loud but he was as friendly as they come. He had a sister within the group called Tilly who looked up to her older brother. He was looked up to as the leader of their friendly group ever since Kurai and Kazuki met them all in class.
"We will show you, I mean it is still technically in the village. It's just beyond the wall!" The boy continued as they all started to run towards the southern gate.

As they arrived a big tree with a stick built den under it stood before them. It was quite big considering it was built by children and with little supplies.
"This is impressive!" Kazuki said admiring the work of his friends.
"Thanks! Come see my lookout point, Kazuki!" Yuki said with laughter in his voice.
He took him to the other side of the tree where there was a little bunker and some toy weapons inside.
"We can watch out for enemy ninja in here!" Yuki pulled out some binoculars and pretended to scout for enemy ninja.
Kazuki laughed and picked up a pair and copied his new found friend.

"What was that?" Kurai asked the group and everyone fell silent.
Kazuki and Yuki went to see what everyone was on about back in the main room.
A tall shadowy figure stood near by, tall and menacing. It was definitely a full fledged ninja.
"Yuki.. Do you recognise that guy?" One of the other boys whispered.

The figure heard them and jumped towards them with a kunai in hand.
"Get back!" The man screamed at them and everyone scattered around screaming.
"Yuki!" shouted Tilly, his younger sister.
Everyone gasped as they see the man holding Yuki against the tree and held a kunai deep into his chest.

The man realised they were just kids. "Shit! No! This isn't how the infiltration was meant to go!"
The man pulled the kunai away and Yuki dropped to the floor.
"Wake up Yuki!" Tilly cried as she kneeled down next to her brother.

Kazuki gritted his teeth as he turned to see where the man went but couldn't see him.
He turned to his brother. "Kurai! What do we do!"
Kurai looked with fear at the situation.
"We need to get our parents!" Kazuki yelled as he started to run back home to get help, crying all the way.
He arrived at his door and screamed "Mom! Dad! It's my friend! He is hurt!"
"Where?!" Onimaro said quickly rushing to his sons aid.
Kazuki led his mom and dad to the scene where Tilly was still crying, begging her brother to wake up.
"Oh god.. Mika! Hurry!" Onimaro yelled to his wife as she picked up the pace and started using medical ninjutsu on the boy.

[Shivraj]

Ahhh.... The Base is formed, aye? x3 Loved it bro! And no grammar mistakes as far as I noticed

[Reminance]

Good chapter

[jcryer]

"I know!" Yuki, shouted.

Found one! I think...
Really loved the story, developing amazingly! Just a couple of commas missing here and there, no mistakes with was/where as far as I can see! Great job