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NaruHina DayLife Story
« on: June 27, 2015, 05:41:57 »
This is for a story for NaruHina fans :)
Well . . . I'm just browsing for a story about 3 days ago, now i'm post it here, well it tooks 2 days to translate it to English :)
So . . . Happy Reading Guys, and this story have about 6 episode :)
This is the First :D

Shinobi Online 01

>English Version

Story by rifuki : https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8707593/1/Shinobi-Online

Summary : Hinata never allowed by her father to get out from their house, feels bridled, and doesn't have friends. But, a game typed VRMMORPG : Shinobi Online that allow player to get inside the game world, have been helped her to know the meaning of freedom, friendhsip, and other thing that she can't get in the real world.

 Shinobi Online
Naruto © Masashi Kishimoto

Warning:  Many computer and in game term. :)
Genre: Sci-Fi, Friendship, Family

Chapter 1
"Naruto"

Sunday, November 13, 2022, 7:00 AM
Hyuuga Resident – Tokyo

"I'm going out, Hinata", her father says.
"Whatever!", Hinata screaming inside of her heart. But, what's out from his mouth just ehm and nod. Hinata stare at her father's pale lavender eyes. Hyuga Hiashi, with a flat gaze. Annoyance and disappointment that she felt she managed to hide it perfectly. Hinata is a quite girl, she rarely tell what's inside of her heart even to her father, the only one family that she has. But the reality is, Hinata never care that her father going out or not.
His father was or was not in this house there is absolutely no difference . Hinata always felt alone.
It is typical days a Hyuuga Hinata is always the same. Left to go by her father alone in the house  in the morning, even before the sun appeared its light. His father was the owner of the largest companies in Japan android, Hyuuga Cyber Company. He was always busy with robots that he created. Even after returning home too, Hiashi spent more time in private lab in the basement of their home.
Hyuuga Cyber Company develops very rapidly because it can't be denied,  because now use Android in daily life is common. Humans use the humanoid robot for various purposes. Than just making a door man, a waiter, a baby sitter until android who served and serve the needs of home care for family members who are often called ' home android '.
Hiashi itself currently has 3 android at home. Two as a bodyguard named Izumo and Kotetsu, another is home android named Hanabi in charge of taking care of the house and fullfil all the needs of Hinata.
Hinata actually do not mind that she companied by 3 androids that was an exorbitant price . Because she understood that her father was very busy and could not accompany her at all times. What make her upset was that she was not allowed to go out of the house. Even for schooling, Hinata has to be home-schooled. Really a monotonous and boring life.
Her father always grounded that this is for Hinata own good. What kind of kindness that her father mean ? The only thing that happen now, until Hinata is 16 years old is she never had a friend. The only one who accompanied her is only Hanabi. Of course Hinata can not assume Hanabi as a friend. She just a robot that wrapped by a synthetic leather(skin). Hanabi would not laugh if Hinata tells a funny thing, Hanabi was not going to feel sad if Hinata tell her laments. Hanabi will not be able to give advice to Hinata when she was in need of guidance. Hanabi could only talk to improvise . She only android who has no emotion.
" Anything else you need Hinata -sama ? ",
Hinata snapped out of her thoughts. Breakfast was finished, she decided to return to her room. This Sunday, there will be no private teachers to come to teach. Moreover Hinata wanted to see the goods that she had just bought at the online store, as it happened that the packet just arrived this morning. "I do not need anything Hanabi. Now I'm going to my room and do not bother me," said Hinata as she went to her room on the 3rd floor.Hanabi bent then clean the table and start his daily routine to care for Hyuuga residence.
After locking her room, Hinata flopped on the bed and unwrapped the package in his hands. Once open, it appears inside of it a helmet that is still wrapped by bubble wrap. Once opened, there written Nerve Gear in the middle. In addition to the helmet there is also a Blu-Ray Disc game titled ' Shinobi Online ' on its cover and also some owner's manual.
Hinata is not a true gamer. Computer or console game that she ever played can be counted by the fingers. Hinata more spend her leisure time at home with reading novels. Because of that, Hinata read the manual available seriously. Moreover, this game's gameplay is totally different from the game that Hinata ever played. Based on what Hinata read on some forums, Shinobi Online is a Virtual Reality Massively Multiplayer Online Role - Playing Game ( VRMMORPG ) type game which allow players to get into the gaming world with the help of Nerve Gear. Nerve Gear is a virtual reality helmet that stimulates the five human senses through the brain, so the player can enter the game world and adventure in it as an adventure in the real world. One more thing that makes this game popular is the theme of the ninja world . In the game the players are required to defeat some bosses to finish the game. But as its popularity increasingly rises, this game even more popular because of the beauty of the world in it. World in it feels so real , not visible when in fact all of it's just a series of programming language code. Seventy percent of players actually not interesting to defeat bosses and completing the game.
They are even more interested to establish friendship and adventure in the game along with all the people from around the world. It's also the thing that makes Hinata insterested.
Didn't take much time for Hinata's laptop that given by her father on her last birthday that has monter spesification to complete the installation of the game. After that, Hinata conect the Nerve Gear with her laptop than put on the Nerve Gear to her head.
Then, Hinata close her eyes.
" LINK START ! " Hinata said.
Nerve Gear sound sensor hear Hinata commands.Shortly thereafter Nerve Gear began to stimulate Hinata's brain and display graphics in the game in the unconscious Hinata. The first time you play Shinobi Online, players must choose their village. Because do not know in detail, Hinata chose randomly and selected village of Konoha as her origin village.
As for her skill Hinata choose Byakugan. Byakugan is eyesight ability that if actived allowing player to see 360 degrees, dozen of metres, even through wall and ground. With this, Hinata categorized as Shinobi that superior in terms of surveillance and taijutsu.
Furthermore, Hinata set her avatar appearance in the game. Hinata decided to equate hair model with the original hair. As for her ninja clothing, she choose lavender coloured jacked and navy blue trousers.  Konoha Protectors she placed around her neck. After completing all the initial setup , it is time adventure in Shinobi Online ...

Sunday, November 13, 2022, 9:00 AM
North Forest - Konohagakure
When she first time enter the game, Hinata was amazed by the beauty of the scenery in Konoha. Understandably, Hinata almost never come out of her house. She never breathe the fresh air like this. She also never felt the sun exposure that is so warm on her skin. Hinata really do not believe that what she was see now actually just a human-made computer graphics display. What people says in the forum is true. It looks so real ! :)
"This is the freedom that I've dreamed about," Hinata muttered. Because she so pleased seeing the beauty of the Konoha Village, Hinata's legs had taken her to a hill. From there she could see the green rice fields. Hinata draw a deep breath  as she  does not want to miss the fresh air that she feel now. Hinata leisure interupted when someone pushed her until she fell to the ground.
"What are you-"
BOOOMM !
Hinata didn't had a chance to finish her words when a kunai with explosive paper right at the place she is standing before. If she doesn't pushed, maybe Hinata will die.
Hinata then noticed that the man who had pushed her was a blond spiky hair man and has a birthmark like a cat's whiskers on both sides of his cheeks. Judging from the protector on his forehead, he also a shinobi from Konoha.
Before Hinata could speak, the figure in front her directly hold the body of Hinata, bridal style. Then he brought Hinata entered the forest. A split second later, there was another series of explosions behind them. Hinata panic, don't know what she have to do. This game is really crazy !  o.O
She just log in and instantly rewarded with a barrage of explosions. Not to mention now she was trying to hold back her embarrassment. Hinata is not unusual to interact with others. So far, only Hiashi that was other person that Hinata ever spoke to. Of course Hanabi, Izumo, and Kotetsu aren't included. Now, the stranger with blonde hair even arbitrarily pick her up when they have not known each other. This make Hinata's heart beat spur very fast. " L - let me off ... " said Hinata stammered , still holding her embarrassment.
"If I drop you, the shinobies will blow you up in to pieces," said the figure flatly.
Hinata finally canceled her request. She just started this game a few minutes ago and directly dead ? Moreover, Hinata heard that once die in this game , the time it takes to revive an avatar is need 3 days. During that time player can not log in to the game. The length of the resurrection time in the Shinobi Online is not without reason. The most important reason is that the player did not waste the lives of their avatar. They are requested to be serious and not waste their lives.
Hinata finally just fall silent in the lap of the blonde teenager while trying to hold back her embarrassment. She finally figured out that the figure take her to the center of Konoha Village, seen from the Large Wooden gate with Konoha Emblem that welcome them. Once entering the village, the blonde teenager drop off Hinata carefully. He then noticed Hinata from head to head. Being watch like that Hinata's cheek feels like heated. :)
"Let me guess, you're a newbie, right?" He asked.
Hinata nodded quickly.
"Ah, as I thought. How could the old player playing around alone near the border village of sound. Lately a lot of new players join this game," He muttered, sounds like complaints in Hinatas' ear. Hinata just remembered , in the manual, she had read that in the Shinobi Online, not all ninja village had diplomatic relations. Hinata just understood, who was pursuing them before was shinobi from village of sound. Hinata have a little trouble in understanding the game with this genre, this isn't like games she ever played, this is much more complicated.
"You still need to learn a lot, Hi - na - ta." that blonde teen chuckled, then showed off his grin. Hinata blushed to hear the blonde teenager calling her name by spelled way. But Hinata realized something. "Y - you know my name?" Hinata asked innocently.
"Gosh, things just like you do not know?" the blonde asked her in disbelief.
Hinata shook her head. Then, the blonde teen pointed above of his head. Hinata looked up to follow the direction of the blonde teen's finger. It appeared the name of the blonde teenager plastered there, complete with blood a.k.a hit points he has. Hinata narrowed her eyes , trying to read the name plastered on the head of the blonde teen.
" Naruto ... " Hinata muttered quietly. :)
Blond teenager named Naruto was back chuckled. :D
"You really have to learn a lot. Go around in the village, there is a lot you need to learn. If you're looking for me, I was in the ramen shop (You must know what ramen shop he means :) ).
I have already submitted requests to exchange contact to your account , once you confirm it, you can see my position on the map. See you." Before Hinata could respond to anything, Naruto is gone from her.
Hinata then rush to see the menu contacts. There is a demand for contact exchange from Naruto. After Hinata confirm it, she saw the word 'friends' there. Naruto turned out to put him in the category of ' friends '.
"Friends". :)
A very rare words that spoken by Hinata. Hinata turned back to see Naruto contact details. She saw the boy's picture grinning. Somehow there is a sense of fun which suddenly Hinata feel. Maybe for Naruto and most people have only a trivial thing. But not for Hinata , this is a new thing for her.
Hinata has found her first friend.
Naruto . :) :D

To Be Continue . . . . . . . . . . . :)


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Re: NaruHina DayLife Story
« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2015, 10:38:27 »
its too long.........:(


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Re: NaruHina DayLife Story
« Reply #3 on: June 28, 2015, 05:14:39 »
Well . . . if you guys think it's too long, You might should try to read the story before you post your comment, i thought that story have a good storyline, never post a comment before your read. :)
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Re: NaruHina DayLife Story
« Reply #4 on: June 29, 2015, 06:21:35 »
Well . . . if you guys think it's too long, You might should try to read the story before you post your comment, i thought that story have a good storyline, never post a comment before your read. :)


You should search for tutorials on how to arrange in page. It will make it easier to read, otherwise people will be influenced and will think it doesn't worth spending the time.


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Re: NaruHina DayLife Story
« Reply #5 on: June 29, 2015, 08:06:32 »
It's a good story, if you think that's too long you need to read more or actually try it out lol.
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Re: NaruHina DayLife Story
« Reply #6 on: June 29, 2015, 08:10:51 »
It's a good story, if you think that's too long you need to read more or actually try it out lol.

I didn't said it's too long. I only told him to try making it attractive for a glance. First impression matters. On the other side, I hate stories, to read or to write. It's not about who actually wrote that but I am simply full of them.


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Re: NaruHina DayLife Story
« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2015, 13:08:21 »
I'll wait for the movie version to come out
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