Takumo

[Yoshiro Ninja]

Name: Takumo
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height:  5'9
Weight: 130
Hairstyle: Spiked Up
Facial hair: None
Hair color: Grey-White
Eye color: Blue
Blood type: A+
Primary chakra nature: Wind
Second chakra nature: Lightning
Chakra mix: Hurricane Style\Release
Village: Rogue Ninja (was a Snow Shinobi.)
Clan: None (For Now)
Good or evil at heart?: Good (even though he is rogue hes good you mess with his comrades and you wont hear the end of it)

Description of the character's personality: Takumo is a reckless loyal young adult who is also immature and a kid at heart. hes funny not too smart (average intelligence) and mostly a slacker. When it comes to ninja training he is the most motivated shinobi in the world.

Description of the character's history: Takumo used to be a hidden snow shinobi. He was a slacker in early ninja school but pulled through thanks to his great sensei. He ran away from the Hidden Snow with his comrade shira at an early age, mostly at his teens. Now he is just a rouge ninja along side with his comrade shira. those two are unstoppable they are the biggest threat of rogue ninjas but are mainly nice people. Heres takumo's motto you dont mess with him and his comrades and he wont kill you

[Mars]

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There is no Hidden Leaf in the game
You can look at all the hidden villages: http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,732.0.html

There are also a couple of punctuation and grammar mistakes, but otherwise; not a bad character!

[Yoshiro Ninja]

alright fixed it ty! but the code didnt work?

[Kai]

One question, why did he run away from the Hidden Snow. Answering this will give your character more detail, otherwise nice character.

[Yoshiro Ninja]

One question, why did he run away from the Hidden Snow. Answering this will give your character more detail, otherwise nice character.

yeah im thinking of rewriting his story its gonna have alot more detail trust me