Drawings by the Dragon

[Shivraj]

Oooh nice!!!!! But IMO he looks too skinny

Yeah, that's just the way he turned out when I copied him over to plain paper. I think he looks pretty good with a few less pounds though.

Yeah but I was just comparing from the original drawing
 

[Dragon6624]

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[Shivraj]

XD nice char but her face looks too masculine don't know why :/ and her torso is a little longer than average.

[Dragon6624]

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[Shivraj]

I see and YW

[Dragon6624]

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[Cedie]

Looks kiddy but nice. The breasts should be firmer to look more succulent (^_^). LOL. Try using coloring materials other than crayons. I'm not good at drawing but I can see you have potentials. Practice more.

[Shivraj]

Hmmm.... What do you use for coloring? Color pencils? Crayons? Oil Pastels are harder to work with but they give a more "professional" look as many people say. http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080930182047AAQrnX9

[Dragon6624]

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[Shivraj]

Wow!! You have improved and IMO the right arm looks more chubbier and shorter than the left one. And the bulge on the skirt on the left side is caused by the knee right? But if it is then the left foot should have been a little more tilted to the left ( if you know what I mean) but that might just be me.


EDIT: I see and I agree with you on color pencils being more precise

[Dragon6624]

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[Shivraj]

Wow!! You have improved and IMO the right arm looks more chubbier and shorter than the left one. And the bulge on the skirt on the left side is caused by the knee right? But if it is then the left foot should have been a little more tilted to the left ( if you know what I mean) but that might just be me.


EDIT: I see and I agree with you on color pencils being more precise

Yeah Shiv, the bulge is from the knee, but I was too lazy to work the foot into the proper position (I was more focused on the outfit and trying to get the hands right). As for the arm, that's a recurring proportion problem I'm just going to have to keep tackling. Ty for the critque though, I'll continue to strive for greatness, just like my motto on art says!

P.S. I think some people could misconstrue that it is better to leave something hanging, I meant that one must always hone their skills in the area/areas best suited to them...kind of like a sword

Ah I see nice lol good luck and I hope you succeed in "tackling" the problem XD

[Dragon6624]

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[Shivraj]

Sorry about not posting anything new lately guys, I've been tossing some ideas around for a bigger project. I'll make sure to have my next pic, Manabu Ohishi (aka Nightmare) ready soon.

YAY!!!!!!!! Cool nickname btw . :3