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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #15 on: January 03, 2015, 17:02:31 »
Yay you finally posted a chapter XD I liked it. If you keep going Ill keep reading it
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #16 on: January 03, 2015, 17:06:17 »
Yay you finally posted a chapter XD I liked it. If you keep going Ill keep reading it

I feel bad for not posting for so long, I'm thinking of posting one or two more chapters today.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #17 on: January 03, 2015, 19:15:50 »
Its really good maybe you could put more descriptoin in it but thats just me. Keep writing! :)

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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #18 on: January 03, 2015, 20:46:44 »
Chapter 2

"Are we there yet, I wanna fiiiiight?" Hachemon yelled.

"No you knucklehead, this is the tenth time you've asked it!" Takashi replied frustrated.

"Keep it down you two the enemy might hear us" Nagare said.

"I guess you're right Nagare." Hachemon and Takashi said in sync.

"wow" The two said in sync again.

"It's getting freaky, keep your mouths shut" Nagare said.

"Yeah, keep your mouth shut Hachemon" Takashi said the same time as Hachemon

"Yeah, keep your mouth shut Takashi"

"Stop it..." A kunai flew threw the air and Nagare deflected it.

"I told you to shut up, didn't I? Well this is better then running, a good fight once in a while can be appreciated." Nagare said with a grin.

"What formation?" Hachemon asked.

"Formation B, right flank." Nagare replied.

"Wind release: Rasenshuriken" Takashi yelled as he stormed towards on of their enemies. Hachemon backed him up with a water shark bullet jutsu.

"Keep it up you two" Nagare said as he sprinted towards 2 of the weaker looking rogues. The two of them cam at him with their Katana's and made a small cut in Nagare's cheek. Nagare quickly recovered and made some shadow clones.

"Chidori!" Nagare said in sync with all his clones, and they charged the 2 opponents. The 2 rogue ninja were pierced by multiple chidori's.

-Meanwhile at Takashi and Hachemon-

"This guy is insane strong!" Takashi said.

"I couldn't agree more" Hachemon said while delfecting kunai.

Takashi's chest was cut very deep by the enemy's katana.

"He.. got me..." Takashi said his last words before blacking out.

"Nagare where are you?" Hachemon said desperately.

"Don't lose your focus in a battle" The enemy shinobi said while forming seals for a great fireball jutsu.

"Oh no you don't" Nagare said while replying with Water dragon jutsu to protect Hachemon.

"Thanks man" Hachemon said with a sign of relief on his face.

"Is he okay?" Nagare said pointing at Takashi.

"I can still sense his presence, he seems to be in a bad shape though."

"At least he's not dead" Nagare said while deflecting the enemy's shuriken.

"Formation E, NOW" Nagare yelled.

Hachemon made the handsigns for a Severing wave jutsu while Nagare charged at the enemy with lightning speed and a chidori.
The enemy jumps

"Miss" The enemy said.

"Water release: Severing wave jutsu!" Hachemon said and cut the enemy clean in half.

"I found something on his body Nagare" Hachemon says.

"Read it"

"We have intercepted the post bird and we want you to kill the enemy forces that will be headed this way" Hachemon read.

"It seems we could've gotten information out of them." Nagare said with a pain in his voice.

"I think our priority is getting Takashi to safety now."

"Yeah, I guess so" Nagare agreed.

 


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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #19 on: January 03, 2015, 21:15:46 »
Good chapter bud! Sounds like I'm pretty talkative though XD
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #20 on: January 03, 2015, 21:20:12 »
Be glad you got to finish off the bad guy, geez.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #21 on: January 03, 2015, 21:30:48 »
Be glad you got to finish off the bad guy, geez.
True i did kick his arse outta here
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #22 on: January 03, 2015, 22:01:52 »
Chapter 3 - Note:

Nagare, Hachemon and Takashi were back in the Hidden Storm, at a hospital so Takashi could rest. Three days have passed since Takashi blacked out and he still didn't wake up. Nagare and Hachemon have been searching for another member for Nami no Kishi so they could finish the case surrounding Yokubo quickly.

Hachemon brushed his teeth while Nagare made breakfast.

"Are you using Takashi's toothbrush again?" Nagare asked Hachemon.

"Maybe..."

"Ugh, you never learn do you?"

"Well what have you made this time?"

"My favorite, Ramen with extra menma."

"Sounds good"

After breakfast the two split up in order to find a new member for the organization. By noon they hadn't found a single shinobi worthy to be invited.

~Hachemon~

Still no one, Hachemon thought while scanning the area for strong shinobi.
But then all of a sudden, the ground split in two and from it 5 shinobi came out of it. Hachemon looked at their headbands and they all head a line carved through the village's symbol.
Rogue's Hachemon thought as he stood still to see if this would attract any strong shinobi.

The group of rogue shinobi started going north, to Nagare.

Maybe they're after Nagare, I've got to hurry! Hachemon got a bad feeling and rushed towards Nagare.

~Nagare~

Nagare was in front of the academy, it was a white building with the Village's symbol on its walls and was scanning the insides and surroundings of the academy. There were shinobi at the training grounds and in the park at the edge of the academy. But none of those seemed to be good enough to qualify for a Nami no Kishi member.

Hmmm, he doesn't seem to be strong enough or does he?

The group of rogue shinobi attacked the boy he was looking at.

I think I'll wait and see what happens.

The boy immediately saw the group of shinobi and used 7 shadow clones. His clones threw an insane barrage of kunai and shuriken, it was enough to keep them occupied long enough for him to make more shadow clones and have those hide in places. He himself hided as well. At the other side of the academy his clones were busy fighting the ninja. His clones took out one of the opposing shinobi by slicing her head off. After a while his clones were destroyed, and they started searching for the real one. As the group of shinobi walked to the south one of the shinobi was struck by a kunai in his head. The remaining 3 turned around and bestowed the bush from where the kunai came with an insane amount of shuriken. They got one of the hiding clones, one of the remaining 3 went to see if it was the real one or not and accidentally set off a paper bomb trap thus killing himself. The other clones came out and used fierce taijutsu to fight the remaining 2 rogue's, the rogue's quickly overpowered the clones and destroyed them. Finally the real one came out and grabbed two katana's and fought the two head-on. He overpowered them quite easily and stabbed both through the heart.

Finally Nagare approached the shinobi and commended him for his strategy.

"What's your name?" Nagare asked.

"I don't really have a name, everyone calls me The Timer."

"Well then timer.." Nagare got interrupted mid-sentence.

"But more importantly, why didn't you help me if you watched me fight all this time." Timer asked a bit angered.

"I will explain it if you accept the following offer: Come and join the Rogue-hunting organization Nami no Kishi."

"Wait what?"

"I know it might be all too sudden, but I'll give you the time to think about it. Meet me at the hospital in 4 hours." And with that Nagare took off.

"But, but wait!"

"It's no use, he's gone." Hachemon said.

"Who are you?"

"I'm that man's friend and a member of Nami no Kishi."

"Another one of you, oh god?!"

"Do you have any clue where he's headed?"

"We were to meet at the hospital in 4 hours, so I guess you'll find him there."

"Thanks" And Hachemon disappeared.

-4 hours later, at the hospital.

"Oh hi Hachemon, I didn't know you where coming." Nagare said after sensing Hachemon's presence in the bushes.

"Haha, you got me"

"Did that guy from earlier show up yet?"

"No, but there he is." Nagare said while pointing at a silhouette in the darkness of the night.

"So you showed up, huh?!" Nagare said.

"What do you want from me?" Timer asked.

"I told you earlier, are you in or not?"

"Yeah, I've thought about it and I'm in. But there's one condition though."

"What condition is that?" Hachemon bumped in.

"My girlfriend, she joins too."

"And who is this girlfriend of yours?" Nagare asked a little bothered.

"She's on top of the building."

"That's impossible, we would've sensed her presence otherwise." But Nagare still looked up, and he saw a girl on top of the hospital.

"Come down, now!" Nagare yelled.

"How are you able to mask your presence so good?" Hachemon asked.

"I'm a special jonin and I specialize in espionage." The girl replied.

"You're both in." Nagare said after thinking a little.

"Now let's go see our fellow member, shall we?" And Nagare went into the hospital and visited Takashi with Hachemon and the two new friends.

"TAKASHI, YOU'RE AWAKE!!" Hachemon yelled with something that looked like tears in his eyes.

"What else does it look like, crybaby." Takashi replied somewhat weak.

"Sorry for being happy and all, you know." Hachemon said.

"Cut it you two. Takashi, meet our two newest members." Nagare said and he pointed at the girl and Timer.


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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #23 on: January 03, 2015, 22:08:13 »
Good new chapter . Keep it up!
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #24 on: January 03, 2015, 22:10:53 »
Thanks m8, I appreciate the compliments <3 :D
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #25 on: January 04, 2015, 17:37:30 »
Loved the chapters i had fun while reading :D
I dont use The Timer anymore though derp.
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #26 on: January 04, 2015, 18:39:53 »
Then make a fucking character on the character boards XD
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #27 on: January 04, 2015, 18:58:49 »
No xD i hate that i dont want a background and all that shit im just a normal guy from blablabla village just call me Reminance in everything :P
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #28 on: January 04, 2015, 19:14:05 »
blablabla village

What does that translate to?
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Re: Fanfic
« Reply #29 on: January 04, 2015, 19:20:36 »
blablabla village

What does that translate to?
I dont know which village i want to be in.
So it translates into undecided
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