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Yoru Kusemono
« on: January 21, 2015, 07:22:42 »
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Name: Yoru Kusemono
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 5 feet and 7 inches
Weight: 140 pounds
Hairstyle: messy/spiky
Facial hair: none
Hair color: very light gray
Eye color: black
Blood type: O-
Primary chakra nature: Wind
Village: Yukigakure
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Good or evil at heart?: Neutral

Description of the character's personality: Yoru has a strong sense of loyalty to his family and his friends. He is rather laid back and not quick to anger. He is always looking to improve upon himself in all aspects of life. Whether that be mental, physical, or emotional. Though he is never necessarily the best at everything he does, he is always putting his best foot forward and giving his all.  Most of all, he is loved by his companions.

Description of the character's history: Yukigakure would've been his village..had he not been born into this world as a rogue ninja. His father and mother both were rogue ninjas prior to him being born. His father was leader of their rogue ninja group.
He didn't have an exceptional amount of friends, but he did have a best friend named Rikka. Aside from that, Yoru had the childhood one could expect for a rogue child. He was proficient in many outdoor activities necessary for survival such as hunting and building shelters. He also trained in the arts of stealth and kenjutsu learning to live within the shadows.
On a high rank mission to gain intel on the "Chakra armor" being developed in Yukigakure, Yoru's squad, led by his father, were ambushed upon arrival by Hidden Snow Village forces. From there they were arrested and taken to the execution block . Yoru watched with horror as his father was decapitated before his very eyes, along with every last one of his squad members. Their heads now rested in the snow just yards from Yoru. He was absolutely devastated. Yoru didn't have too long to mourn though as he was next up for execution and his time was running out. Yoru was dragged over to the executioner and closed his eyes as he felt the icy blade push up against his throat. He heard the blade clang to the floor and gasps of shock from the surrounding Yukigakure soldiers. He looked up to see a kunai sprouting from the head of the executioner. Suddenly, Rikka had burst from the shadows snatching up Yoru. From there they booked it, sprinting out of the village as Rikka explained she had followed them under the tip-off of the Yukigakure guards waiting in ambush, with kunai and shuriken whizzing past them. They made it to the exit of the village as more rogue ninja came as reinforcements. They were able to hold them off long enough for Yoru and Rikka to successfully make it back to the rogue community. Yoru asked how Rikka acquired such information and she explained that one of the members of the Yukigakure guard had turned rogue because of the tyrannical rule of Dotō Kazahana and found the rogue ninja group on his way out of the village. With his father dead, it was now upon Yoru to fill in as the leader of his rogue ninja kin.
« Last Edit: January 21, 2015, 17:24:30 by Raenir »


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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2015, 08:09:18 »
Really nice character, I liked how you weaved the story around the SLO universe, not just make shit up.
There are a minuscule amount of mistakes so again, well done man!
« Last Edit: January 21, 2015, 16:24:30 by Mars »
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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2015, 13:39:05 »
This. Was. AWESOME.
This story is so unique it's unreal. I don't think anyone here has thought of making their character a born rogue before, least I haven't seen one. Good job :D
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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2015, 16:07:46 »
Nice one :)
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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #4 on: January 21, 2015, 16:19:51 »
Nice characrer! Like Leebz said you're probably the only person on this forum whose character was born rogue.

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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2015, 17:22:41 »
Haha thanks guys :) I was wanting to strive for something a little different so I'm glad to see it worked out
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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #6 on: January 22, 2015, 20:42:29 »
Good char profile its very interesting
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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #7 on: January 23, 2015, 20:45:39 »
That was actually a really good history. Good job man!
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Re: Yoru Kusemono
« Reply #8 on: January 23, 2015, 20:55:53 »
Really cool character and awesome story. It would be pretty cool if you made a life story about him in the Naruto Fanworks  ;D but you don't have to if you don't want to.
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