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General Discussion / Re: Let Me Die
« on: September 08, 2016, 07:23:03 »
Ooh, this is exciting. I really like your pacing on this. I've read some stuff that tries to accomplish the psychological complexities you described, but it becomes very unyielding and structurally awkward, or it defaults to redundancy. You've done a nice job in regards to balancing the vivid images, action, and internal struggle of Sera so that it's overall a satisfying work to read and experience. I actually lost my breath at one point because I was so into Sera's psyche lol.
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