Well, the game has not seen any update for maybe a year now. So it's not surprising that many of the active members have become inactive.
Also from what I heard last, is that Vreg and team are probably revamping the entire game, so yeah, ig we should continue with our normal lives and lurk in from time to time.

APPLICATION FORM FOR HEATHEN ORGANIZATION

Name: Hazato Uzumaki- Shizen
Gender: Male
Ninja Rank(If possible): Sensei (Which is applicable: Commander, Captain and etc.)
Chakra Nature(s): Lighting and Wind
Previous Village: Hidden Forest
Specialization(Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, etc.): Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu

I am willing to be part of this Organization

Ok, I'm not sure how active taiga is rn, and I have disabled my discord, so can't possibly contact him, but yeah two things,
Firstly, Sensei is not a position in the organisation.
Yeah if you want to train the newbies in the org, you can apply for captain of trainees.

Secondly, you are kinda on an application spree, as I see you are applying for multiple orgs.
And Nova had pointed out earlier, that it could raise doubt on your loyalty to a particular org.

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Otherwise, everything else is good, decent I'd say. I'll PM taiga if he is available and ask him to check out your application.

PS- do not expect much activity as of now.

I thought marriage system was out of question due to stuff we discussed earlier.

Nevertheless, I'd support the option of
Join clan/ go solo, during character creation, but partially.
That is, it is upto the clan to decide whether they would like to be an open clan or semi-open clan or closed clan (probably similar with orgs). Obviously not all clans would like a new player to join who might be too weak and might... well, 'tarnish' the clan's image.

So there can be open clans, where new player can join by just clicking on join button, semi-open, where new player has to request to join and finally closed, where new player needs to get invited by the clan to be a part of it.
Depending on that, the closed clans should get seniority with respect to jutsus and scrolls or any consumables.
Then the semi open ones and finally the open clans.

So new players can either A) join an open clan and have early company advantage.
OR
B) go solo, prove his worth and be invited into a closed clan.

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About that scroll thingy, I'd like it to be a mission/quest in the gameplay. I didn't fully understand it, but of what I could make of it, it sounds much more interesting on a quest level.

Quote from: Tsunayoshi on May 09, 2018, 15:33:03

I watched the anime

hi

The anime?

Quite sure he meant THIS
@Jojoj0

Lol I thought this was a troll thingy.
I like your org logo.

@Akyma Daemy no hard feelings but hear me out.
You say you had the idea first, more precisely on August 2016. FINE.
FYI, Katakiuchi has existed here for longer than that, IIRC August 2014, that makes it two years older than yours.
So the idea of using sins as an org theme has existed in this particular game before yours. Notice how I emphasize on this game. Because it does not matter whichever game you are coming from, the originality of the idea is irrelevant in such cases. its about who presented it first.

A good forum member would have thoroughly scourged the forum before making such a post. If the idea has already been implemented, you could have gone ahead with that, that is, joined kata (in this case). But if you really want to lead an org, you could have put up something else. Or you could have just joined Kata tbh, they at least have a system which gives you a chance of rising through the ranks, which your org lacks.
Also, I find some flaws, in your organisation.
1) Leadership and ranks. IMO, all the sins have should have equal weightage and influence rather than one of them being superior to the remaining 6. At least in theory. Generally, the 7 sins have been viewed as equally.. umm.. 'sinful' so yeah, giving the right to lead to one single sin doesnt sit well with me.
Unless, its like a council and the 7 members vote to choose a 'chairman' kinda role.

2) Enemies.

Enemies: All who are going down our path.

Why are they your enemies if they are going down your path? That should make them your allies.
Perhaps "All those who hinder/obstruct our path." would sound better.

Also the symbols you used, the new ones, for the sins seem familiar, and like Nova said, you should at least give credits to the person who made it/ on who's work you are basing your ideas on.

That's all I guess, other than the fact that Kimatsu shall now always remind me of a Katakiuchi parody with french subtitles.

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have fun and good luck



 

pretty interesting there.
And an applaudable effort for the OC. Good luck

you know how I almost forgot about you

Wait sending you the clan stuff.

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Also yeah, I have an idea of the four ways of the tiger. But I need to graduate my final semseter with a decent gpa and make my family proud of me (for once ;_; )

So I'll lurk until I actually get time to post it.

I see another 5 character pin. Password protecting your clan name eh?

good OC tho. Would like to see where the history leads to