One of my fan naruto inspired stories sorry for bad english, i did my best and i dont know how many time i will post other chapters. if you will like a lot i try to find much time for working on it

   

       „Jaikebo...“
      „It´s time...“
      „Jaikebo...“
       Ominous whisper was crawling through the room like a monstrous snake. A young ninja could not even take a breath in from the fear. His room was being filled by an unknown power, he could feel it all around himself. The muscles surrounding his eyes were already stinging from the sheer force of having his eyelids shut tight.
        „It´s time, Jaikebo,“ sounded the first of the voices, high pitched and desperate, the voice of a broken widow with a knife stabbed in her heart.
   „There is no way out,“ said the another voice, demonic, deep, as if followed by the ice-cold death.
   His body was trembling with terror. Abominable murmur sounded as if from the most sinister parts of the other world. He felt as if the room was being filled with the dank smell of the deceasing bodies. The eeriest thing was the fact that that was not a dream. He could sense every perception, every little noise. He could smell his own acidic sweat soaking his pyjamas and the sheets, it seemed that every drop of sweat is a little piece of a decaying body. Fierce bite to his lip jerked him out of the claws of an invisible fear, but the taste of the blood trickling down from the wound was causing him nausea.
   Why was he even scared? He knew, after all, that the time was nearing, that they would have come for him, that he was the chosen one. The chosen one to would have died by the merciless death.
   „Open your eyes, Jaikebo...“
   „We don´t want to harm you…”
   „We don´t?...”
   „We´ll see about that…”
   Excruciating voices were slipping into every part of his body, the indescribable sense of approaching death clenched his heart, and when the black-and-white mist in the middle of the room began to form into the shape of something alive, he jumped up. The fear took hold of his body again, he was unable to control his own chakra. But from the remaining strength he grabbed the ornamental iron stick, his only weapon, and focused all of his last chakra into it. The stick pulsed with golden electric current, spattering out every now and then. The live mist feignedly stopped and stiffened. Not for long, though. Before anyone could ever react, the demonic creature consumed him fully. Alarmingly, he found out that not a single sound was coming out of his mouth. He did not have a single chance to call out the other members of his clan for help.
   „We are being patient, Jaikebo...“
   „But not for long!...“
   He felt an enormous pain in his shoulders and sensed that something is coming out of them.
    „To cause hurt?...“ sounded from the right.
   „Definitely!...“answer from the left.
   „Good...“
   Entity with Jaikebo in its body ascended to the air and as fast as possible, without any rattle, flew out of the open window, snatching off the bamboo bars holding the curtains. Till he lost his consciousness he got a glance of his clan´s sign on a massive sapphire pole in the middle of their territory, disappearing in the growing darkness of the night.

ORANGE: female demon voice
PURPLE: male demon voice

Quote from: Doylo Bushida on March 06, 2016, 20:41:27

Organization name: Kuroiakuma (Black demon)

Organization logo: (will be soon )

Founder: Tayiki Imanoshi

Leader: Doylo Bushida

Affiliation: Place named Invisible Stairs (Fukashi Kaidan) is home for all members of Kuroiakuma. Noone ever saw this place, its hidden by secret sealing technique which used Tayiki Imanoshi, when he firstly feel kuroiakuma inside him. He wanted to separated from the world and fight alone with demon. At Fukashi Kaidan they sleep, eat and meditate, but place, where they trains and speaks about their goals, is ancient church carved to the rock. People are afraid of this place, cause its situated at border between Hidden Thunder and Hidden Vulcano, so here comes to meetings between fire and storm.

Allies & Enemies: as organization of „trash“ people they have no allies but also no strict enemies. Every man who respect them is their allie and every man who laughs at them or attacking them is their enemy.

History: (coming soon)

Purpose/Goals: Get rid of kuroiakoma, control it, use it for protect world and make it peaceful place.

Unique features: All members got one hand black as ash and this hand isnt human at all. Its hand of kuroiakuma, black demon, looks like black and slim hand of lizzard. This hand makes their techniques much more stronger and give them black shade. But using this hand too much is dangerous, using technique with demon hand is very painful. Also, cause they´re „trash“ shinobis, they hide faces between stone masks, everyone has different mask which covers all the face and head except eyes.

Rankings: all members are equal except leader. Its up to leader what other members will do every day.

Members:  Doylo Bushida
                             Katara Umugin
                             Ryak Imigachi

Rules:  - listen to leader
                       - kill all who betray organization or use akuma power for bad intentions
                       - everyone who ever took down their mask when theyre out of their base have to be tortured by fire to criple their face
                       - never believe Western clans, cause they created kuroiakuma

So what is the Black Demon? How will this translate into the game where it might not exist, along with the Invisible Stairs?

i had to devise place where my organization will be situated, well, i could just write that its near to Hidden Metal. But i wanted to make specific information about their territory. Maybe i did horrible mistake, dont know but if there will be some more information about SLO world, about its geography, about villages and their look, making an organization will be much better...yesterday i saw concepts of villages, that make me basic view on SLO worlds, but i want much more...and Black demon makes nothing, people from this organization has just black hands cause of demon, nothing more but story im writing about Kuroiakuma is different, in story this demon´s doing things...and at the end i had to apologize, im here 3 days and i posted literally all i had in my head, thats why many of my topics havent no sense, or they are not reconsidered. I promise to the future, i will change and i reconsider all my steps before i step out

There were some concepts for the villages, but I don't think it has been official yet.
Just look around on the facebook page, as most of the stuff gets posted on there.

If I'm being honest I don't see the point of some of these discussions that are being opened, but that might just be me lol.

well, to be honest, i forget that SLO has Facebook page, but know i see there are concepts, and they are amazing! hopefully they will not be changed and thanks for thinking that my discussions are without any point, now i have feedback and i know that maybe i have to bu shuted up im too active, and my topics have no point, because all of this, all ideas, mechanics, everything were in my head 2-3 years ago! and im both, sad and happy that it will be real one time. I think my biggest problem is, that youre making it for 3 years? and im here just 3 days, and i dont know nothing about this page, about other discussions, about your 3 yearses ideas etc. So sorry if im pointlessly post every shit i have in my head, i will change it and please, im not defending myself, im not attacking you, i just wanted to tell you truth about me

Our current planned system:

1. The shinobi ranks of Academy Student, Genin, Chunin, Special Jonin (Chunin ranked shinobi whom have a certain Jonin-level ability) and Jonin.
2. An ELO-based shinobi rating that effectively measures the level of skill of the player behind a character, this rating is what will show the difference between e.g. a highly skilled Genin and an average Chunin, or a highly skilled Jonin and an average Jonin.

Having a certain shinobi rating is what will make you eligible for upgrading your shinobi rank by participating in the required exams, participating in said exams to increase your shinobi rank is however a personal choice that is left to you and is in no way mandatory. You have to take account the changes that will come forth once your shinobi rank has increased. For example, a Jonin ranked shinobi will get more difficult missions, will have to lead a Genin team, but will also get a higher pay, these are just a few examples of the type of changes that can occur.

So if your shinobi rating gets high enough, you will get invited to partake in exams for the next rank. If you partake in these exams and get required minimum grade (these exams are both theoretical and practical), you will get assigned your new shinobi rank.

Now to answer this specific topic, although we have currently no plans to add more shinobi ranks, I'm not against the idea.

thanks for reaction Vreg and thanks for explanation of rank system, and i still hope that there could be more ranks, maybe not for shinobis, but for rogue ninjas etc. as i mentioned

Quote from: Mars on March 07, 2016, 23:20:15

Quote from: Konohuro on March 06, 2016, 20:11:17

Interesting name... it somehow seems familiar... it reminds me of something... but... can't remember... was it a Pokemon?

No, it's Himitsu with hac put on the front kek

^This guy got the initial idea.

well, now i dont know if its embarrassing u or nah...i know our titles of clans are similar, but my and also your clan have bases at japanese words as i said, title of my clan is mix of Hachi and Mitsu, which in japanese means Bee and Honey...my clan is about bees and honey, thats why i maid Hachimitsu clan, literally Beehoney clan and your clan means Secret...so i see no problem in their similarity

I do not think it will be easy. If they hit you its probably game over, unless you have a very specific set of skills, like the only akatsuki member to take one down without it inhabiting a host.

yeah, it wont be easy. thats why this achievements will be rare

Quote from: Doylo Bushida on March 07, 2016, 21:43:13

by this sentence i meant, that in LOL (League of Legends), players from high elo (diamond league) and low elo (bronze league) has no difference, cause they play with same items and same champs, so its only about theirs skill...and this thing is with SLO too, so in SLO high ELO players are different from low ELO players just with skills, not with gear and weapons there could be genin with high elo and genin with low elo, so same rank but different elo you know

I understand what you're talking about. But I'm sure SLO will have gear of different quality. So it won't just be a standard set of gear that you use forever, but you can actually obtain new and better gear of higher quality through dungeons and looting ninja during wars.

I think its big difference between ELO and RANKING. ELO depends on player´s skills, on their game, etc. and RANKING depends on his leveling. What im trying to say is, that also low level players could have bigger ELO than high level players = High ELO player - but only genin with low gear and weak jutsus, cause hes just a genin and Low ELO player - but jonin with much better gear and jutsu...so its not depends on ELO but on level/rank

Quote from: Konohuro on March 07, 2016, 20:36:14

There is no difference between a high ELO and a low ELO beside the played time in game, probably.
They can compete against each other anytime, there is no disadvantage or advantage for any of them.

Confused by what you're trying to say here.
Let's assume elo is obtained through missions and killing shinobi in the free-zone (danger zone or w/e you want to call it), yes you're right that players with any elo can fight, but a ninja with a higher elo would obviously have better equipment and jutsus.

i think they wanted to say, that theres difference between elo and players rank like in LOL for example, people which are diamond are just good players, but theyre playing with same champs and same items so its only about skill of players...