The Yugure council has decided that you need to stay active so that we get to know you, so you're in a undecided state, just stay active and we'll be keeping an eye!

Quote from: TheSupremeKing on October 26, 2015, 11:25:35

Quote from: Shivraj on October 26, 2015, 07:26:04

accepted, I like your history btw will add you to the list right away!

Thanks but i will need to change the history a little bit. Oh, and i will gladly be a candidate for the position of Lust if of course you don't have another person in consideration for the position.

okay, i'll share your application with the other Yugure when I get the time, you're in consideration, I can only give you one advice, stay active on the forums .

Shivraj will be my most favorite Rogue ^^
xD also on-topic i like the twist of Himitsu and Kirishima in here. (Even though you didn't ask permission)

Nice character design and history, and you've made the Kirishima and Himitsu thing work. I'm glad you read up on things and didn't say you had a KG or anything.

To make it better i suggest re-sizing the character, maybe? Also, using paragraphs instead of one wall of text.

Quote from: Shivraj on October 26, 2015, 07:25:12

woah, child of a Kirishima AND Himitsu member... must say... nice idea, but, I think you should ask @Leebz if he has any problem with this, not likely, but just to be sure .

Forbidden love child kek.
Honestly, I do find this a little hard to accept. I don't mind the person being of two clans if the child isn't in my clan and I only say that because Himitsu is so secretive and would never accept someone from the outside so carelessly.. Especially as Kirishima and Himitsu have bad blood.

The only way I see this really working out is the mother, Asami went rogue from the clan, disobeying all orders to be with Daichi from the Kirishima but even then, if she did, the Himitsu would of sent a few high level family members after her to bring her back or kill her. Failing the high level ninja we have we would of hired a rogue organisation to do it for us or with us.

I think you need to go more in depth with this to make it work as you have picked two clans that would never really accept one another in their clan therefore it would be some Romeo & Juliet forbidden love type of thing and we all know how that ended.

I am very flattered you included Himitsu in your family tree but either go a little more in depth or change it.
All in all, awesome character. :3