Quote from: DarthTyrael on May 23, 2017, 15:06:13

Outdated info for Ennia, Akagi and Sabaku, please revise

Akagi and Ennia due to being dead (last post quote from America for Ennia):

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Unfortunately, Clan Ennia is dead. All houses are released back into their own clans.

The reasoning has to do with official SLO lore, more will be revealed when the SLO lore is released.

Was fun being with you, however, Ennia must split.
Gj otherwise, nice layout, quick summary of the clans and only the top few listed for those that like popularity. Maybe include links in names for easier access to clan posts.

thanks and which info is outdated? I've already stated Akagi to be extinct and I added in that Clan Ennia no longer exists. (I knew but forgot to add that in) @DarthTyrael

Too large to list as Sabaku went under a large revamp, including the fact it exists of three branches. Best to check it out yourself (main page is a must, branches optional though highly suggested.) @mamoudou52404

You can find the link to the main page on each seperate branch (just click on my clan name to go to Kitsune, and then click on the first 'Sabaku' you find)

Well good luck with your clan

A few things are bothering me here... hope you edit them:
1. The logos of your org and clan
First of all they are covering your post... so reduce the size
Second, the org logo seem not to be having a transparent background. No really, you just put the forum bg color in it didnt you? idk though

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Its covering Band some portion of the e in the "History" section I guess.

2. *Cause pain

3. Correction in the Katakana name of your clan
As far as my knowledge in Katakana, ツル = Tsuru which I guess stands for stork or something.
while ツ does stands for "Tsu" , ル stands for "ru" not "ri"
The correct Katakana for "Tsuri" is ツリ where リ = "ri"

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What does tsuri mean tho? Tree? 
 

@Toratsume Nyshn Seeing it's katakana, my best guess would be a japan-ification of the English word "Three" (because the symbol consists of threefold of comma's and curves) rather than "Tree".

But yeah, ツリ would be the right way to write that.

As for the layout... Eh. Can't add anything more.

Content wise:

Limiting your players to the fact that they MUST be in Hikatsuri is a bit of a shame, but your call.
Also:

Allies

None, Never Going to Have

Enemies

EveryBody

Hairstyle: (Picture)

Might want to change that to spike/spiked/spikey. That would describe it best I suppose.

Hair color: Periwinkle

Odd name for a color o.O oddly specific

Final suggestion, in my opinion it would be best suited to change your last name (whether that be 'Jisatsu' if you took the traditional Japanese name display or 'Ishi' for the English name display) to 'Raiu', since that is the clan you chose to take part in, making them your family.

But again, that depends on you - it's just my personal preference.

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Welcome to SLO ^^ Be sure to check the links in @Snoopy 's signature for some useful links if you need them.

There is. Scroll up from your post a bit and you'll find it

Very nice, well detailed and good use of the branches' characteristics.
If you have discord, you can join the village's discord by pressing on the logo

Welcome to SLO, Sabaku and lastly but most importantly, welcome to the Hidden Dust ^^

Never heard of you but that's no surprise since I'm not so old member.

Good to see old members returning, welcome back!

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4.What village do we get after hiden hill?Did u decided about it ? xd

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4. Undecided, but I assume Hidden Thunder /shrug

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In response to this, the latest Twitch broadcast (streamed on the 2nd of April) hinted at Hidden Dust becoming the next village, however the Dev Blog concept art tease would hint towards Hidden Forest instead.


In all honesty, I wouldn't know, though Hidden Dust would be fairly easier to create (not a lot of vegetation xD)