...My new buddy just came out,his name is...
Errr...
Not sure if you are just writing excerpts from this guy's diary which are focused on Ragna.
If that's the case, then its fine.
If not,
P.S. don't read this part if it is the first case.
I'd like to state that a diary is maintained either on a daily basis or on eventful dates.
In this case, I'm sure this person Must have had more memorable experiences other than things related to ragna.
I'd like to see other stuff too, like picking up fights, meeting a cool shinobi, his sixth birthday, 7th birthday... friends' birthdays, adventures, etc.
Covering only Ragna memories would be a bit boring since I'm supposing you'll make a different story for him.
Finally, I'd suggest you get someone to proof read your works before you post.... someone good with english.
Hab fun
I will focus in Shizou in the next chapters,and yes I have to find someone
Thnx for the replies they makes me better
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