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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: Leebz on November 26, 2014, 17:57:34

Title: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on November 26, 2014, 17:57:34
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Name: Onimaro Himitsu
Age: 28
Gender: Male(http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100316202219/naruto/images/thumb/8/83/Gender_Male.svg/18px-Gender_Male.svg.png)
Height: 6'2
Weight: 115lb
Hairstyle: Long
Facial hair: N/A
Hair color: Silver/White
Eye color: Violet/Dark Blue
Blood type: O
Primary chakra nature: Lightning
Village: Hidden in Thunder
Abilities: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Good or evil at heart?: Good

Weapon: A Wooden Staff that Onimaro uses his Wood Style to manipulate. He may have been raised in Hidden Thunder but was born in Hidden Forest which is where he obtained his abilities. The Staff was handed down to him by his Mother. (This is only if I get Wood Style in the full game.)

Description of the character's personality: A very calm and relaxed shinobi even in battle. He puts his comrades first and always thinks before acting out. He hates people who betray their comrades as he believes loyalty is above everything else, he follows orders of his higher ranks and always has done due to the history of one of his brothers.

Description of the character's history:
Age 8 Sadly as a child he lost one brother in the last ninja war and another to a mystery disappearance. He was told he went where the thunder called but believed he left out of cowardness and always strived to be stronger than both brothers so neither fate falls upon him.

Age 12 Onimaro was part of a small team in the Hidden Thunder. He kept at his goal of being stronger than both brothers and never strayed off that path. As moody as he was he still protected his friends with all his might. He never wanted any of them to get hurt so always pushed himself too far in training sessions, even after his sensei told him to go easy on himself.

Age 15 Onimaro, now Jonin, went on many missions to many villages. He was also trusted to do missions with allied villages. One village in particular was the Land of Snow, where he met the infamous ninja, Mika (http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,1240.0.html) Yukimo, another Jonin who he was constantly paired with as they did so well together. He fell in love with Mika and decided to confess his love. To his disbelief she confessed her love for him at the same time.

Age 18 Now married, Onimaro and Mika lived in the Hidden Snow, where Mika was born and raised. They lived there and birthed their first son into the village. Their son, Kurai (http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,1096.0.html), was a healthy young boy with blue hair, which was similar to the blue hair of the founder of the clan. This made the Himitsu family very surprised as no one born in Himitsu has had blue hair for centuries.

Age 20 Onimaro and his family moved to the Hidden Forest, where they decided to settle down. This is also where they birthed their second son, Kazuki (http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,1104.0.html). Kazuki had white hair which was more common amongst Himitsu. Onimaro was very proud of his family.

Age 28 Onimaro walked both of his sons to sign up at the ninja academy where he believed they would excel incredibly. Kazuki, being two years younger than Kurai, started early due to the fact he showed potential. On the way back he ran into a friend, Hari (http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,1383.0.html) Tsukegami of the Hidden Hill, who told him news of his brother had surfaced. Immediately remembering the brother who abandoned him he went home to tell his wife about the news. With understanding, Mika let him head to the Hidden Thunder, where Onimaro was raised. As he arrived he went straight to the Kage of the Hidden Thunder and standing before him was his eldest brother, Reminance (http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/topic,1103.0.html), the brother who supposedly died in battle. He stood, dumbstruck, trying to find words and his brother just hugged him, telling him he will have his back from now on.

Story of his missing brother, [No name yet]: Onimaro was 10, being raised by his last living brother, [N/A]. News of his eldest brother dying in the last ninja war hit him hard and [N/A] had to take care of Onimaro, the struggle was hard for him but he trained just as hard to protect his little brother, so hard that his skills was noticed by many shinobi and the Kage forced him to become apart of ANBU and leave his life behind, he could no longer live with and protect Onimaro. As time past he watched over Onimaro from a distance, not allowed to get back in touch with him. Being apart of ANBU, his life had to be left a mystery, like a thick cloud from which the thunder of his village rumbles.

    Clan         Organisation         Norowa
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Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Mars on November 26, 2014, 18:29:45
Nice character! I'll look forward to seeing him ingame
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Kai on November 26, 2014, 18:34:03
Cool character, i suggest that you add his abilities, e.g. taijutsu, kenjutsu etc
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on November 26, 2014, 20:58:37
Thanks for the feedback guys :D
Ill add his abilities now :3
I might work on his back story a little more when I feel creative xD
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: json243 on November 27, 2014, 04:00:27
interesting character i like it
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on July 09, 2015, 19:02:15
BUMP
Edited characters look completely. What do you guys think?
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Mars on July 09, 2015, 20:49:04
Looks great :)
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Batt on July 09, 2015, 22:00:18
Cool looking character :D
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: jedikan on July 09, 2015, 22:08:47
nice!
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Reminance on July 10, 2015, 18:34:39
This looks sick Leebz :P
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Kayleb on July 10, 2015, 18:47:23
That clothing is brilliant
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Mars on July 10, 2015, 22:17:24
*cough*Himitsu has designed clothing already*cough*
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on July 11, 2015, 15:26:02
(http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag345/Leebz/Mars%20Himitsu%20Sig_zpseerttm7y.png)
Mars' character on a Himitsu sig :3

(http://i1372.photobucket.com/albums/ag345/Leebz/Shivraj%20Himitsu%20Sig_zpsyrnphab7.png)
Shivrajs character on a Himitsu sig :3
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Shivraj on July 13, 2015, 04:42:12
Arigatou!!!! :3
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Konohuro on July 29, 2015, 17:33:01
A very interesting character. I like how you linked your history to your family members, that actually are members of the community. However there is something that you should change- my suggestion. It says that Kazuki is 2 years youger than Kurai, but if you check their bios, is exactly the other way around.
Modifying it, it won't affect too much the main history.
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Leebz on July 29, 2015, 17:55:08
A very interesting character. I like how you linked your history to your family members, that actually are members of the community. However there is something that you should change- my suggestion. It says that Kazuki is 2 years youger than Kurai, but if you check their bios, is exactly the other way around.
Modifying it, it won't affect too much the main history.

Thanks for the feedback. I think we had a small discussion on Skype about working our characters together and decided Mars was our first child and Shivraj was our second. Being the second child Shivraj lacked attention and due to Mars' hair being blue (Unseen in the Himitsu family for generations) Mars got even more attention. This made Shivraj feel unloved and with his backstory of having a rough life (Check my latest chapter in my Himitsu story) he goes rogue and tries to unite the villages to make the world happier and to make sure no one feels the pain he did as a child.. Or so to speak. I am still unsure if @Mars and @Shivraj agree to this sort of storyline as we never really finished that conversation. If they do decide to switch and Shivraj be older than Mars' then I will change it :P
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Shivraj on July 29, 2015, 18:13:53
@Leebz I like the storyline you made :)
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: Sanji on August 07, 2015, 02:36:27
all of the tinges in this character is a great
Title: Re: Onimaro Himitsu
Post by: mamita on November 20, 2024, 16:45:59
So this is Reminance's brother. Ok.