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Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: AugustRed on August 04, 2014, 23:06:52

Title: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: AugustRed on August 04, 2014, 23:06:52
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Full Name: Luciano Aburame
Nickname: Luci

Age: 14
Birthdate: 03/21
Gender: Male

Height: 5’4 in
Weight: 92 lbs

Nindo: "Fight me and you shall Never recover. Forfeit and withdraw "
Personality: Luciano is a calm, quiet and laid back, very laid back as well as being a collect, solitary and a quite mysterious person rarely ever smiling or showing emotion making him observant and silent, leading to a somewhat 'antisocial' attitude.  At times Luciano can get aggravated easily but usually he can control his anger. Other than loving peaceful places, Luciano also has a love for training, making sure he is in top shape for any fight to come, so that way higher ranking shinobi doesn't look down on him. Usually is seen with his in hands in his pockets. Luciano also likes to study various insects while he is in a peaceful environment when no one is around looking for ways to counter weaknesses.

Village: Konohagakure 
Rank: Genin
First Class:  Ninjutsu Class
Second Class: Sensor Subclass

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Bloodline: Aburame Clan (http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=97&t=20134051#358361881)
• Genin : 1,500 insects
• They do not need to form hand signs to perform the lower level techniques or supplementary ones due to connecting to their insects easier. (C rank maximum)
• The Aburame have an affinity for bugs and various insects, thus knowing and gaining a rare knowledge of antidotes and poisons.
• Due to the two different chakra sources, Genjutsu that is recognized as such can be Kai-ed out of with the insect's assistance. (assistance Kai, not self-Kai) Drains 500 insects for use.
• Aburame techniques that mention chakra draining/absorption restore 1/2 of the insects used for the technique upon success.


Chakra Pool:   225 +  225 = 450
Stamina Pool: 025 +  025 = 050
Chakra Element: Fuuton
Chakra Color: Silverish White with Black speckles
Chakra Materialization: Takes the form of a Beetle

Strengths:
• Ninjutsu
• Tracking
• Control Over kikaichu
• A Fast Thinker
• Stealth
Weaknesses:
• Crystal Release ( for now)
Fears:
• Feeling Weak
• Death
• Being Emotional
Class Disciplines :
• Elemental Specialist: You are only able to have one (1) chosen chakra element. Your elemental ninjutsu possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same element and rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You begin with two (2) additional ninjutsu slots, and earn an additional three (3) ninjutsu slots whenever you rank up.

• Resolution: The user is more determined to get fine details from his sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the user's range of the technique is reduced by half. The user is able to discover type of technique that is about to be active(fuuin, genjutsu, ninjutsu, custom jutsu, complex tai and buki), even specifics such as Blood Line type and rank. Additionally, the user can gain similar information about any chakra source in their sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses, and how large their chakra pool is. 

Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster. - Ninjutsu Class
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. - Sensory Class
•  Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster.- Sensory Class
Personal Attributes:
The Clans True Successor - Learn Clan techniques one (2) post faster. 
•  The Clan Prodigy - 2 Extra Custom Jutsu
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Ryo: 両 $0000000
AC:        0001400
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 4
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 1
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 08 / 12
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 05
• [strike]Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00[/strike]
• [strike]Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00[/strike]
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Weapon Type:   N/A
Weapon Range:  N/A
Weapon Weight: N/A
Weapon Location:
• N/A

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• Shuriken x5
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(http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=4&t=20707371#358719021)
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: Damenshi on August 05, 2014, 04:00:24
The level of detail here is astounding.
Well done, sir.
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: AugustRed on August 05, 2014, 04:01:58
The level of detail here is astounding.
Well done, sir.
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: json243 on August 05, 2014, 04:06:22
Dang boy you really outdid yourself here
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: Damenshi on August 05, 2014, 04:09:49
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho
What rp was that, if I may ask?
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: AugustRed on August 05, 2014, 06:09:04
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho
What rp was that, if I may ask?
its a rp on gaiaonline called shinobi Nations
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: Damenshi on August 05, 2014, 06:41:26
ty ty, all thanks to the layout of the rp i was in tho
What rp was that, if I may ask?
its a rp on gaiaonline called shinobi Nations

Ah, I get'cha.
Perhaps I'll take a look at it, flesh out my own character a bit.
(If I can track it down, of course.)
Thank you.
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: m4r1us on August 05, 2014, 08:12:24
Nice character. Only one thing that I'd like to point out:

Going to the Hokages Office to vote Luciano felt as though it was taking to long so he went back to train Leaving a shadow clone in his place, who voted for Masaru Uchiha, who became the next Hokage........
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I don't think that genin actually get to vote for the Hokage. But anyways, that's a small, insignificant detail, nice character overall.
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: conteledemonte on August 05, 2014, 08:16:26
It's a really nice character, but unfortunately, clans from Naruto won't be implemented. Well, I think you can create Aburame clan, but you'll not get insects.
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: AugustRed on August 05, 2014, 21:26:14
Nice character. Only one thing that I'd like to point out:

Going to the Hokages Office to vote Luciano felt as though it was taking to long so he went back to train Leaving a shadow clone in his place, who voted for Masaru Uchiha, who became the next Hokage........
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I don't think that genin actually get to vote for the Hokage. But anyways, that's a small, insignificant detail, nice character overall.

hue i forgot to take tht part out, but during the rp, there wasnt a hokage as well as not alot of members of the leaf so everyone had to vote. i couldnt find the update version of my OC which was a chuunin/ root member so i grabbed this one. I might make a layout of the character i want to make in Narusumi
Title: Re: An OC i developed a while ago
Post by: mamita on November 10, 2024, 13:42:52
It's impressively detailed, but I say it needs a rewrite... As a Kazangakure ninja!