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Art Category => 3D Modeling => Topic started by: Sadaiyan974 on June 08, 2017, 13:49:52

Title: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Sadaiyan974 on June 08, 2017, 13:49:52

Hello world  :)
I recently start to modeling and i would like to know your opinion on my work .
(http://nsm07.casimages.com/img/2017/06/08//17060803074722976315084430.jpg)

(http://nsm07.casimages.com/img/2017/06/08//17060803074522976315084429.jpg)

(http://nsm07.casimages.com/img/2017/06/08//17060803074322976315084428.jpg)

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Jimmy neutr on June 08, 2017, 14:15:51

fucking suck cuz

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Sadaiyan974 on June 08, 2017, 14:30:57

What ? :o

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Nova on June 08, 2017, 15:15:48

It looks pretty decent, may want to sharpen the blade up a bit though (as it looked really round, from what I could tell of it anyways)
Other than that well done (I'm not that familiar with modeling, so can't really give you that much feedback)

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Leebz on June 08, 2017, 16:09:31

Quote from: Nova on June 08, 2017, 15:15:48

It looks pretty decent, may want to sharpen the blade up a bit though (as it looked really round, from what I could tell of it anyways)
Other than that well done (I'm not that familiar with modeling, so can't really give you that much feedback)

A mans blade is only as sharp as his mind, Nova.

As for the model, it's pretty good but you definitely have room for improvement. Maybe sharpen the tip and maybe make it curve slightly less? Seems too curved to be alegit katana.

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Sadaiyan974 on June 08, 2017, 17:24:20

Thank's for your advices. I'm going to modify the katana and I post it later. :)

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Kakashi Natsu on July 18, 2017, 01:52:26

Looks really smooth(the blades need to be sharper), but good job. If you want some ideas look at my models of the katanas and see where you can improve on. But good work.

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Sadaiyan974 on July 18, 2017, 08:14:36

Quote from: Kakashi Natsu on July 18, 2017, 01:52:26

Looks really smooth(the blades need to be sharper), but good job. If you want some ideas look at my models of the katanas and see where you can improve on. But good work.

Thank you. Ok I take note :), I'm a begginer so if you have other advices tell me for help to improve my models.
I looked for your models on your website it's original.

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: |Sean| on July 19, 2017, 03:42:56

It looks a lot better than my first sword : )

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Ragna on July 19, 2017, 09:18:39

Looks nice,I want to see it updated it too,keep up the good work ;)

Title: Re: Sadaiyan's model
Post by: Sadaiyan974 on July 20, 2017, 10:43:51

Thank you :)
I'll show you soon a new version of katana  ;)