Shinobi Life Online

Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: Keita on August 02, 2016, 02:26:15

Title: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Keita on August 02, 2016, 02:26:15
(http://theartmad.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/05/Anime-Boy-With-Brown-Hair-And-Sword-1.jpg)
Name:Keita Himitsu                             
Age: 17
Gender:Male
Height: N/A
Weight: N/A
Hairstyle:Medium length hair,usually silky but sometimes spiky
Facial hair:None
Hair color:Brown
Eye color:Blue
Blood type:Uknown
Primary chakra nature:Lightning
Hidden Village:Thunder Village
Clan:Himitsu
Good or evil at heart?:Evil,He tends to hold grudge

Description of the character's personality:Curious,Hot Blooded,Bloodlust,rational intellectual
Description of the character's history:

Childhood:     

The story began 17 years ago,when a woman gave a
birth to the child who will affect the shinobi's world from its root.
The newborn baby was named "Keita" after his grandfather's name,
unfortunatelly the mother couldn't handle it and died few minutes later.

(https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/2c/5c/b3/2c5cb38ec1e4b91e1803981d2fce1776.jpg)

The days passed,and the father was given a crucial mission to accomplish,which is to infiltrate to a nearby village in order to obtain an important scroll that contain information that may prevent the village from having unnecessary conflicts. Due to some unknown reasons,the father didn't succeeded the mission but rather than fail, he fled with the scroll.
His family felt ashamed about the dirty deed of their descendant,especially the grandfather who was a strict old geezer.The later had a dojo with a very humble number of student and because he didn't want keita to follow his father steps he decided to teach him being a samurai when he grow up.
At the age of 3, Keita commenced his training in the dojo under the supervision of his old man.The boy was a promising fighter so it didn't take him so long to catch up on his swordplay and within 2 years he became capable of defeating the rest of his mates despite being younger.

(http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/gintama/images/5/56/Shinsengumi-dojo.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20091108173536)

With his prodigious talent to overcome difficulties the boy fed up from the samurai style,so he asked his old man to enroll him within the academy so he can learn more about the shinobi world.But instead he locked him down in the house. regardless that fact the boy's curiousity ended up increasing more and more. untill a sudden event occured and changed the flow of his peaceful life.the young boy felt like a prisoner in that place and couldn't endure it anymore, and due to him being compelled to listen to the voices he had in his head, he attempted to murder to his granddad.
of course the assassination failed and keita ran away and in addition to that stealing his family legacy.At the beginning, Keita was happy because he regained his freedom but so soon he found out that he had no place to go. it's true that he was a stray homeless kid but he still registered for the school. Ignoring the fact of living a miserable life he focused on his studies and improving his techniques.

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Fortunately, the case didn't last so long and that's when he met Taiga.
After joining Heathen, the young himitsu has started to develop his techniques to another level with a quick pace especially when he is surrounded by well trained shinobi from around the world .

Weapons: 

The "Hitsu" Sword is considered as keita's family legacy.It is said that it's seen as a legendary blade due to its special ability that absorb the wielder's chakra and transform it into a visual element shroud that surround the blade.

(http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/auburnhigh/images/f/f6/Lightning_Blade.jpgfb18ea31-f48a-4c4d-a993-a3c825c4bba6Larger.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20120730151913)         (http://static.wixstatic.com/media/d08646_f857b092e63628070648e6241cb90a59.jpg_512)

Special Thanks to : Taigakun
To be continued...
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Kings_Head on August 02, 2016, 02:35:08
Holy shit this is probably one of the most well written histories I've ever read, i really like how you add the pictures in between the story, and it's also good to have another evil shinobi in this world xD, good stuff dude can't wait for the next part
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Keita on August 02, 2016, 02:43:02
Thanks for you feedback,I'll try to upload the rest asap :)
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: taigakun on August 02, 2016, 13:37:04
Good job setting it up man. It turned out really nice
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: jcryer on August 02, 2016, 13:42:41
Nice character! Definitely one of the nicest laid out stories I've seen on here, and it's a pretty good plot too xD
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Nova on August 02, 2016, 13:49:23
Nicely done, as the others have already said, I too like the lay-out on the story.
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Ken on August 02, 2016, 16:03:33
Nicely done :D I love the lay-out
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Toratsume Nyshn on August 02, 2016, 16:37:15
This was quite well... aaand informative.
Good work *thumbs up*
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Yamasukage on August 02, 2016, 18:05:02
Awesome character history dude I loved how it flowed well and how you incorporated pics into it
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Reminance on August 02, 2016, 18:20:02
richtig gut
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Keita on August 02, 2016, 21:20:19
I really appreciate it guys , and if you believe that anything needs to be adjusted tell me.
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: Seguro416 on August 03, 2016, 01:03:04
Nice bro :D
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: mamoudou52404 on August 04, 2016, 00:17:45
Wow, I like how you incorporated the pictures with everything :D ..... Amazing job I look forward to reading the next part :o and if u need help writing I can help you plan out ur ideas and all, :P otherwise awesome job, and ill be keeping an eye out for more parts, wt also rlly caught my eye is that u have the same weapon as me, including some of the same abilities :D @Keita
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: huntasol on August 04, 2016, 00:33:30
awesome character !
Title: Re: Keita Himitsu
Post by: mamita on November 22, 2024, 17:39:33
Fair amount of cool swords in this setting ngl