Shinobi Life Online
Shinobi Life Online Category => Shinobi Life Online Character => Topic started by: SyntaxError73 on February 18, 2015, 23:05:08
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I have updated a teeny bit. I read round the forums for things about this game.
(http://i1173.photobucket.com/albums/r589/Techwolf77/Thischaracterlookslikeme_zps226a9b90.png)
I think she looks a lot like me in real life. (except I have blue eyes.)
I can't think of a cool name, Getting stuck because I want it to sound like a Manga/Anime name.
Name: Hikari (HAHA, I have a winged wolf character using this name before I even knew it was a Japanese name!)
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Height: 5' 9" (a few inches taller than me IRL)
Weight: (It's hard to do weight for a girl)
Hairstyle: (In the picture, long)
Facial hair: N/A (itsa girl XD)
Hair color: In between Blond and Brown. (Like mine)
Eye color: Dark
Blood type: (I would choose my blood type but I don't know my blood type.)
Primary chakra nature: Lightning [Edited]
Village: Shogekihagakure (because who doesn't think big booming explosions are cool?)
Clan: Kandakai clan
Good or evil at heart?: Good at heart, but she does have an attitude.
Description of the character's personality: Tough, can be rude. Tries to help people but it's hard for her to get noticed. Sometimes emotional. Anger issues. Mentally awkward. She does have a slight mental disorder. (like me) She fails to hide her worst emotions. Hard for her to make friends. Sometimes defiant of her authorities.
Description of the character's history: As a little girl, Hikari was always the smart, knows-everything outcast, one who didn't have any friends. As she got older, this sadness turned to anger. She loved to yell at authorities. One day, the yelling got really loud when she decided to mix in her chakra. She wanted to prove her point that she was just a neglected child. Everyone ran; They were terrified of her. Nobody wanted to be around an angry person who could project her voice like thunder. As she got older, she learned lightning, lightning could get her anything she wanted, except for a friend. She stopped blasting her problems out at others, instead she used her intelligence to find a way out of this mess. She has a few friends. She is also a little depressed because she could never get herself a boyfriend. But nothing would be as great as getting her mother back, whom she accidentally killed during one of her 8 year old tantrums.
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Nice character.
As for names, I'd suggest:
Grace
Gabriella
Gabrielle
Genevieve
Giselle
Gloria
Gina
Gabriela
Gia
Giada
Gwendolyn
Gracie
Georgia
Guinevere
Gretchen
Gwen
Greta
Gladys
Gigi
Gertrude
Gillian
Giuliana
Geraldine
Glenda
Griselda
Ginny
Gwenevere
Georgette
Gabi
Gisela
Gretel
Gwyndolin
Gladis
Ginnie
Gisel
Gwyn
Gabriele
Gisella
Gweneth
Gracelyn
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Just go and search Japanese names and you will get the results so chose one of them and then chose a name and then join a clan on slo for a surname. Or you can create your own clan. The site I got my name from but I changed the gender to feminine so you can chose your name. www.behindthename.com/names/gender/feminine/usage/japanese
And @Mars she said she wants her character's name to sound like a Manga/Anime and you just gave her suggestions about English names...... XD.......
EDIT: I forgot to say this but Nice character! :D.
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Finally, someone that actually read the forums before posting. Nice character!
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Just go and search Japanese names and you will get the results so chose one of them and then chose a name and then join a clan on slo for a surname. Or you can create your own clan. The site I got my name from but I changed the gender to feminine so you can chose your name. www.behindthename.com/names/gender/feminine/usage/japanese
And @Mars she said she wants her character's name to sound like a Manga/Anime and you just gave her suggestions about English names...... XD.......
[joke]It was a joke[/joke]
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Just go and search Japanese names and you will get the results so chose one of them and then chose a name and then join a clan on slo for a surname. Or you can create your own clan. The site I got my name from but I changed the gender to feminine so you can chose your name. www.behindthename.com/names/gender/feminine/usage/japanese
And @Mars she said she wants her character's name to sound like a Manga/Anime and you just gave her suggestions about English names...... XD.......
[joke]It was a joke[/joke]
Yeah and a britbong can only give English names :P.
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Cool character. You can just look up cool names in japanese like I did. It works well.
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I have updated a teeny bit. I read round the forums for things about this game.
(http://i1173.photobucket.com/albums/r589/Techwolf77/Thischaracterlookslikeme_zps226a9b90.png)
I think she looks a lot like me in real life. (except I have blue eyes.)
I can't think of a cool name, Getting stuck because I want it to sound like a Manga/Anime name.
Name: (IDK, it's so hard.)
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Height: 5' 9" (a few inches taller than me IRL)
Weight: (It's hard to do weight for a girl)
Hairstyle: (In the picture, long)
Facial hair: N/A (itsa girl XD)
Hair color: In between Blond and Brown. (Like mine)
Eye color: Dark
Blood type: (I would choose my blood type but I don't know my blood type.)
Primary chakra nature: Lightning [Edited]
Village: Shogekihagakure (because who doesn't think big booming explosions are cool?)
Clan: (To be decided)
Good or evil at heart?: Good at heart, but she does have an attitude.
Description of the character's personality: Tough, can be rude. Tries to help people but it's hard for her to get noticed. Sometimes emotional. Anger issues. Mentally awkward. She does have a slight mental disorder. (like me) She fails to hide her worst emotions. Hard for her to make friends. Sometimes defiant of her authorities.
Description of the character's history: (I'm working on it.)
Nice character so far, here are some suggestions that I hope will help.
Blood types usually go O (most common type), A, B, and AB. You can also add in + or - if you want. As for weight, Tsunade is stated to have (depending on the source) somewhere between 107-128 pounds on her (this is counting that her illusion disguises her real form, which is that of an old woman). Therefore, if your (female) teen has about the same height and muscle as Tsunade (normal, not chakra imbued), then you could probably put your character's weight at around 100-110 pounds (or the equivalent metric system weight). Not everyone has to have a clan (Ten ten doesn't and she's pretty good as a kunoichi), so don't worry too heavily about that (plus, most of this forum's clans blow anyway).
And finally, male and female first names (not family names mind you) generally tend to differ in their endings (guys will often have 'maru' or 'ro'). I found a few good endings to work with for the female sex, so all you have to do is get a name generator and spot the female one that you prefer. Anyway, here you go:
Link to random Naruto Name Generator: http://name-generators.net/naruto-name-generator/
Female First Name Endings:
ko, mi, ka, na, sa, ri, ki, hi, yo, ka
Of course, I'm still working on figuring out how to come up with what each japanese name means, so you may want to revise your name in the future (Ik I'm going to have to with some of my drawings).
Anyway, hope this helps! :)
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Thanks everyone! you are so nice!
Her first name is Hikari, because I used that name once when making a wolf character about 4 years ago. I just now realized it's a Japanese name.
Plus the name fits her personality perfectly. It means "Light".
despite her outer toughness, I think that inside she is a really caring soul.
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Cool, glad you were able to find a name that really meant something for your character (farther than I got :) ) Good luck with the history, I will look forward to reading it.
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Cool, glad you were able to find a name that really meant something for your character (farther than I got :) ) Good luck with the history, I will look forward to reading it.
That's going to be hard.... I might start with when she was young..
Maybe she enjoyed the sound of thunderstorms.. and she wondered if she could harness the powers of shockwaves to get people to notice her (at first) then it turned to a whole thing about thunderstorms making flowers grow. so she took that into her head and thought that maybe something this dangerous and powerful can bring something good to the world. now she uses the power of explosive sounds and lightning to keep her village safe. because nobody wants to get their ears busted by a shockwave, then get pummeled by a girl.
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My suggestion to write the history - start making up a starting in your mind and then write the starting and keep making things up as you go on (makes it easier) and then when you are done then just read the story once again and correct out any contradictions or grammar or spelling error. Atleast that's how I wrote my story (everyone says it's good but I don't know :P).
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I like this character, but it seems she's lacking a last name.
Try looking around the clans board to find a clan that suits you
Clans (http://www.shinobilifeonline.com/index.php/board,22.0.html)
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Its looks good but a background history would be good for it.
I rate this 7/10 strawberry's
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I can't find a clan that suits me... (mainly village transfer issues.)
Should I make my own?
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I can't find a clan that suits me... (mainly village transfer issues.)
Should I make my own?
Yeah, make your own or you could wait for someone else to make a clan which might suit you. And btw clans aren't village bound so you could be in a Hidden Thunder clan but be in the Hidden Ash, if that's what you mean by village transfer issues.
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I can't find a clan that suits me... (mainly village transfer issues.)
Should I make my own?
Village transfer what do you mean by that??
Also you could make your own if you are a good leader.
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Updated with Character background and clan.
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Updated with Character background and clan.
So you made your own clan :P
It looks good from what i have seen.
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Updated with Character background and clan.
So you made your own clan :P
It looks good from what i have seen.
I am glad it isn't bad XD
The character story is okay right?
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Using Lightning Release to increase vocal power is kinda cool I'll admit, like a proto Sound style. @SyntaxError73